Hi, there Smilesunshine. I read your profile and at first I thought it was really nice. Then, because you seemed to really want to know, when I read it a second time I did come up with something.
Now, I'm no expert at profiles. I'm even worse at giving critisism, but one thing did stand out in the what you are looking for section. It kind of reads like this: "Willing to jump any good man". For some men, that could be good. But for others, thay may be considered a little aggressive???
I love that you are so family oriented, though. That's a big plus!
Good luck!
Ann.