2 observations:
1)loads of spelling mistakes. Shows that you don't care, even if you do (ie "kids, believe" etc)
2)photos also have that "I don't care" look about them. You are good looking chap, so why are you showing yourself in such a bad way. In first pic you look like a thug, second is better, but why on earth you choose that composition behind you? Third one: friendly piece of advice don't expose your kiddie on international site.