A new creation. What do you think about it?
Choice of words, meaning etc...
Is everything clear, or maybe some parts too difficult to understand?
Does the headline fit good to it?
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Adorable duplicity
Your smiles, and laughs, and words so sweet
Your eyes, and body, irresistable charme
You got so many wonderful sides, but none is true
You make bees buzz and birds start to tweet
Like you’re not able to commit any harm
But anyone around is poisoned, all just by you
You can’t deny
You were approaching me
You have prepared and set the track
Arming them with bitter lies
And forced them to aim thoughtless at me
Now, while I am drawing flak,
Giving it thousands of tries
To banish false blame and make them see
That you are not
As you’re supposed to be
Your sharp tongue, stabbing my soul
Hear its dark sighing sound
Causing my heart to bleed
An emptyness, ghastly to foal
See my drops falling down
Why did you set them free?
I want you... to be
As you pretended to me
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© by me ;P
I found some of my old poems, This is one of my most favorite english ones. Just felt like in the mood to post it. Maybe u'll like it...
LiaR - Love is a Rose
If I’d ever compare your beauty
To something as lovely and tough,
I assure,
An ocean of roses won’t be enough.
But have a look at this tiny little rose,
If I’d care, it might overreach all those
As it grows, and grows, and grows.
Unbelievable, some kind of magic that,
As you see it once, you’ll never forget,
As you hold it once, you’ll never let it fall apart
Oh dearest rose, you’re the centre of my heart
Many people love roses
Also this one, it is true
But no one like I do
As well as I love you
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© by me ;) - 20.02.2009
The german one, actually, is 3 times that long (having a different ending/meaning). Maybe I'll translate it some time...
But this way, it is much more romantic, I think.
I'm happy about any feedback...
Still searching for her
Wherever I go, every breath I take
I hardly dare
To stop and give it a break
Never forget, neither forsake!
Someday I'll find her
Wherever it'll be, whatever to do
My deepest to bare
To my one, only and true
Maybe she, who I need, is You...
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© by me ;)
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