Interminable Search

klingt einbisschen traurig, was du gechrieben hast..sei nur geduldig! du siehst ja vertrauenswuerdig und witzig aus. Ich bin sicher, dass du bestimmt bald deine prinzess finden wirst. also..entschuldigung, dass ich hier deutsch angewandt habe. kann ich vielleicht etwas deutsch von dir lernen? :P
anyway...herzlichen willkommen bei cs. viel glueck fuer deine suche!

yan, when did you learn German? Once i learnt French myself. But i found it difficult and i didnt have time, mood and determination to learn it. and give it up for ever.

Klingt ein bisschen verzweifelt. Es gibt ein sprichwort das sagt, je mehr Du suchst desto mehr entfernt es sich! Viel glueck

oh, I'm not too sad about that. indeed it's the first time ever that I really start searching. Anyway, I believe that I'll meet her, once the time has come. Nothing to worry about...
I just like to write, and I think that a poem with such a topic should be that emotional.

Indeed, it isn't that sad, cause it contains much of hope. In my opinion the 1. stanza expresses negative feelings and the 2. one positive.



Maybe that happened after some time, when she had started studying it. Not the best language to study - I might add...
Too much irregular forms, etc. and doesn't sound that good as well (my opinion).


I prefer writing in English right here. But if you want to, then I can post another poem - this time a german one. then u can discuss its different meanings and the social criticism in it.

But beware! That one contains a really dark mood...

I dont understand german at all....but thought ur poem was nice...

hehe..smitten, this poem itself has nothing to do with german.

no i no, poem isnt german, but it seemed thats what the blog ended up being......

Oh really? But I suppose it'll end up in English?
German...is in between. If you want to join and make it a German ending, feel free to... :)