Interminable Search
Still searching for herWherever I go, every breath I take
I hardly dare
To stop and give it a break
Never forget, neither forsake!
Someday I'll find her
Wherever it'll be, whatever to do
My deepest to bare
To my one, only and true
Maybe she, who I need, is You...
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© by me ;)
Comments (12)
anyway...herzlichen willkommen bei cs. viel glueck fuer deine suche!
I just like to write, and I think that a poem with such a topic should be that emotional.
Indeed, it isn't that sad, cause it contains much of hope. In my opinion the 1. stanza expresses negative feelings and the 2. one positive.
Maybe that happened after some time, when she had started studying it. Not the best language to study - I might add...
Too much irregular forms, etc. and doesn't sound that good as well (my opinion).
I prefer writing in English right here. But if you want to, then I can post another poem - this time a german one. then u can discuss its different meanings and the social criticism in it.
But beware! That one contains a really dark mood...
Because...es freut mich sehr sehr, dich kennenzulernen. Doch weiss ich, dass mein Deutsch noch schlecht ist.
Hi Jan, I started learning German 2 years ago as my major. So I cannot give it up anyways however difficult I find it now. lol... I have more time learning it than any other subjects, so much time that it almost makes me puke...
By the way, what does Bardawulf mean?
German...is in between. If you want to join and make it a German ending, feel free to... :)
I tried to correct the following quotes of what u've written in order to help u a bit lerning german.
Euhhm, i don't exactly know what you are talking about... (Du weißt nicht, wie ich was meine?)
Hmm, I'd bet, for the same reason as yours is. I learned it at school and it was one of my mayor subjects at school as I graduated(and better than the rest as well -_-*).
Nope, you didn't. That's what a blog is for, isn't it?
At first I didn't want to blog anything. Because there is a forum for discussions and mail system for private stuff, I don't really see much sense in blogs (on this site, at least). I only uploaded that poem, because it fits somehow to this site. I just didn't want to add it to my profile, cause there's alredy (too) much text (compared to alot other profiles i've had a look at, so far).
Anyway, I don't really know, what I should write about. And if it's something I want to discuss, then I'd prefer English again, that more people are able to take part in the discussion.
I was about to use the blog as my "creative junkyard"...
If I'll find somehing, that I'd like to discuss, I'll try to post it bilingual.
By the way, what does Bardawulf mean?
Pheww, hard to find any good german music... I don't really like that pop- and casting-show-sh*t. Sadly there's too much of that.
I'm not sure about the meaning of 'Bardawulf'. As I was searching for a new nick once, I found a site listing alot. I chose that one, because I liked it.
Searching for the meaning led to different expressions, but on most of the sites you find the meaning: ax-wolf.
Funnily enough I just found another one, where I read that it's supposed to be an old german name.
BARDAWULF: Old German equivalent of Anglo-Saxon Bertulf, meaning "bright wolf."
Whatever it means... I like that name.
Oh THANK YOU VERY MUCH for picking out sooo many mistakes from my German, what a dead strike!
Ok, it depends on you to blog or not, I was only saying and having a small chat with you. :) But blog is more interesting than forums to me. It differs from people to people. Best of luck to you.
And the more u read and write, the sooner u improve!
Hey, I still got 2 short-stories (about 1000 characters each) lying around, which I once wrote for a "science-fiction creative contest".
I'll send u one later (when i've got some time and am in the right mood to look for it).
If u got questions, cause u don't understand anything, then feel yourself free to ask, or maybe better use an online dictionary (is faster)
this here is my most favorite one, because there are alot languages supported: