Tell me what you think. And be honest

this is a poem i wrote:

With beautiful waves of golden brown hair,
her beauty caught my eye and i couldnt help but stare
I want to tell her how i feel
but i cant get up the courage to deal
with how she makes me nervous and butterflies in my stomach fly
she makes me feel as if i could touch the sky
the ground seems to disappear beneath my feet
everytime i try to greet
this beautiful girl that has caught my eye
i hope she will give a chance to this guy . . . . .
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Comments (4)

I love it! It expresses how you feel! Id love a guy to give me tahat except I'm not brown haired he'd have to change it to blonde hair.

Its beautiful
thanks
glad ya like it
lol yea but wouldnt u rather have one made bout u rather than 1 rewritten for you?
wonderful!
nice i like that
yea it is easier to recreate but its also alot of fun
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