Tell me what you think. And be honest
this is a poem i wrote:With beautiful waves of golden brown hair,
her beauty caught my eye and i couldnt help but stare
I want to tell her how i feel
but i cant get up the courage to deal
with how she makes me nervous and butterflies in my stomach fly
she makes me feel as if i could touch the sky
the ground seems to disappear beneath my feet
everytime i try to greet
this beautiful girl that has caught my eye
i hope she will give a chance to this guy . . . . .
Comments (4)
Its beautiful
glad ya like it
lol yea but wouldnt u rather have one made bout u rather than 1 rewritten for you?
yea it is easier to recreate but its also alot of fun