poem of betrayal

It’s said if you love someone you have to set them free
I did, and she took with her an essential part of me
My hope and my heart was ripped apart
And maybe the chance of a great new start
Of a life full of love, joy and happiness
Now the future looks only full of pain and sadness

She said it means nothing
And nothing is how I feel
But rejection and dejection are certainly real
These emotions that hurt, cut like a knife
All this pain from a girl who would be a wife
Who should stand by me, love me, and want only me
She said it means nothing but now I can see
She choose him over staying with me.

She says it means nothing, her future is clear
Her life is with me through happiness and tears
But how can I believe when she aches for him yet
To run his hands over until she is wet
To push himself forward where each thrust is met
How can I believe when she aches for him yet

She says that she loves me, that her feelings are true
But can she love me and yet still want him too?
She says that in time these feelings will pass
Like words spoken onto a cold piece of glass
But will these feelings pass or will they remain
Rising like a flame when she sees him again
Casting my memory aside like a toy
To go off and play with her handsome big boy

Will my heart bleed, can I take the pain
When she rips it apart and hurts me again
Should I leave now while my heart is intact?
That thought has come up as a matter of fact

I stay cause I love this girl who hurts me so bad
Who plays with my mind till I surly go mad
She is part of me now, in my soul and my heart
Now I wait and I wonder when the pain will start
When the lies she will spin like a work of art

When she really must see her father again
Or say that her farmor is really in pain
She has to visit, she won’t be gone long
Over the weekend, she won’t do no wrong
To his flat and his bed she will lay down again
And open up all of my anguish and all of my pain

I hope that she wont, I hope she’ll stay true
That this obsession fades off into the blue
I can only but wait, to see if it happens or not
If she really does love me, or if it’s all just rot
I hope that she does feel the same love that I have
I pray that she loves me, I don’t like to feel sad
They say if you love someone then set them free
I wish I’d said no , please stay here with me.


this was a poem I wrote in 2002 , you can guess why it was written . Has anyone else put pen to paper to express their pain ? share it and let it go.
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thats really sad
That was really good but sad, I agree writing is a great way to express your feelings.
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