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Poem) I Still Feel You

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Tonight though you’re far away
Gone for a couple of days
I still feel you

Your shirt I’ll put on when I dress
I’ll still smell you with every breath
I still feel you

You’ll be in every beat of my heart
I don’t like it when we’re apart
I still feel you

When I close my eyes, see your face
Feeling spectacular sizzle every place
I still feel you

Your ghostly presents felt, I surrender
Feel the fire of your touch caressingly tender
I still feel you

In my dreams your tangible, so near
To hard to grasp like the air, until your here
I still feel you
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giftedmuse930
giftedmuse930●Valley Stream, New York USA
Jul 21, 2007
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Really thought your poem was evocative...I felt the longing you felt regarding the absence of your loved one and that makes for a excellent poem!! Well donethumbs up
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