you picked me up ( Archived) (14)

Sep 30, 2009 8:42 PM CST you picked me up
you picked me up
i know this belongs in poetry but i have put most of my writing in here for my friends to see for over a tear so here it is very simple and short lol

i lost my way lost you struggled just to
pay the rent
i called you
you bailed me out
you picked me up

i cried over my ravaged breaking heart
fearing it would
never mend
your words were as a salve
you picked me up

i was angry frustrated with
a cruel demeaning boss
you listened
and were my champion
you picked me up

i got smashed all to hell
by a car
fearfulness frailty replaced
my energy
you were my best friend
when i couldnt walk up the stairs
lol
you picked me up
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Sep 30, 2009 8:52 PM CST you picked me up
HealthyLiving
HealthyLivingHealthyLivingSomewhere In, Tennessee USA527 Threads 2 Polls 4,775 Posts
Love it, Dawn!!thumbs up


It's Beautiful!!!


Hope you are doing much better these days!

Love YOU!
HL

teddybear bouquet heart wings
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Sep 30, 2009 8:53 PM CST you picked me up
hopefloats
hopefloatshopefloatsSlim's Lady, Tennessee USA51 Threads 6,660 Posts
Beautiful sis!hug bouquet teddybear
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Sep 30, 2009 8:55 PM CST you picked me up
virgiomonkey
virgiomonkeyvirgiomonkeyAuckland, New Zealand4,241 Posts
..........Nice one Dawn.....grin thumbs up

J.Dgrin devil
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Sep 30, 2009 8:59 PM CST you picked me up
amahlala
amahlalaamahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USA21 Threads 8,314 Posts
bouquet Very pretty Dawn....hug
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Sep 30, 2009 9:05 PM CST you picked me up
Laura25
Laura25Laura25Somewhere, New York USA50 Threads 6 Polls 8,178 Posts
Very nice, Dawn!

Toast to best friend wine
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Sep 30, 2009 9:16 PM CST you picked me up
Laura25: Very nice, Dawn!

Toast to best friend


hey all thanks lol it was simple like my brain i am doing okay lolteddybear hug hug
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Sep 30, 2009 9:20 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
During THE WORLd CUP 2006 FESTIVITIES,I held my brothers girlfriends sisters friend,,,,about 145 pounds over my shoulders for about 45 minutes.
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Sep 30, 2009 9:20 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
thewall2: During THE WORLd CUP 2006 FESTIVITIES,I held my brothers girlfriends sisters friend,,,,about 145 pounds over my shoulders for about 45 minutes.


She was short and couldn't see the concert.
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Sep 30, 2009 9:21 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
PEOPLE looked at us oddly.
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Sep 30, 2009 9:21 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2: She was short and couldn't see the concert.


lol wall you are the bomb you are the type of guy who would be there for others hug
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Sep 30, 2009 9:28 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
Dawn7z: lol wall you are the bomb you are the type of guy who would be there for others


It's GOD'S WILL...thank you lady.blushing
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Sep 30, 2009 9:29 PM CST you picked me up
thewall2: PEOPLE looked at us oddly.


people scmeeple lol
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Sep 30, 2009 9:30 PM CST you picked me up
Very inspirational writing, Dawn. Beautiful!
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