Sensual Rain ( Archived) (8)

Jul 11, 2005 12:26 AM CST Sensual Rain
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Sensual Rain

Quiet, and still
frame of time dense
Waiting
hushed expection
Swells
One leaf shook,
another, another...
And then the rain fell
audible sighs of thanks,
Pleasure, need
met through offering
Gentle covering

by Me

Nene
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Jul 11, 2005 12:41 AM CST Sensual Rain
sassy_candi_951
sassy_candi_951sassy_candi_951Ames, Iowa USA10 Threads 115 Posts
that was good nene, Anymore?? Love to hear them : )
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Jul 11, 2005 12:46 AM CST Sensual Rain
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Heh,
Hey thanks:)
Yes, I have more. Can't sleep, lol.

Nene
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Jul 11, 2005 1:16 AM CST Sensual Rain
sassy_candi_951
sassy_candi_951sassy_candi_951Ames, Iowa USA10 Threads 115 Posts
sleep, don't remember the word..lol... : P
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Jul 11, 2005 8:28 AM CST Sensual Rain
nineinchnails
nineinchnailsnineinchnails14 Threads 325 Posts
keep going
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Jul 11, 2005 8:41 AM CST Sensual Rain
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Keep me
and my comfort swells
Chain me,
this frenzied heart
Flies wild
Hurt me
be bond of pieces shattered
Trap me,
I disappear...

by me
Nene

Heh
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Jul 11, 2005 11:36 AM CST Sensual Rain
sassy_candi_951
sassy_candi_951sassy_candi_951Ames, Iowa USA10 Threads 115 Posts
Nene, those are good, it it one poem or a 2 parter/more?
Have you published it yet? you should.
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Jul 11, 2005 12:37 PM CST Sensual Rain
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Hiya thanks,

Actually whole other one.
Haven't had these published. Have had some in the local paper. One editors choice from an anthology place. But, it's a money scam, lol.

This one just did today, here...

Nene
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