UNDER THE GLOW OF THE FIRE (7)
scarwolve: INTRODUCTION
we set up camp on a small wooded hill
were we found a little ruins of a church
with a fast flowing stream tickling down the hill
like a snake finding its way through the long grass
the leafs littered the ground and with no ceiling
on the ruined church the rocks and soil was rather damp
when darkness fell the magical night had happened
and here is the poetic story of my camping night
UNDER THE GLOW OF THE FIRE
Under the cover of darkness
under the twinkling stars of the sky
we gathered around the camp fire
to give us warmth and light
I gazed into your diamond like green eyes
sparkling by the flickering of flames
do i see the glowing embrace of your
lush red hair stalking down your face
How i notice you concentrate on the
vibes of the music of the guitar
retuning it to clearly speak
of whats on your mind
the glow from the fire
reflects the paleness of
your light soft skin and
the ever loving smile
you have within
many days i have longed
for a night like this
to be within your company
just to hold your hand
and to listen to you sing
I placed my arms around you
and we slowly lean forward
for our lips to match together
under the twinkling stars
do we wait for dawn to break
we sit there alone with just
the two of us but to be in your
everlasting embrace is the momment
i will always treasure
we set up camp on a small wooded hill
were we found a little ruins of a church
with a fast flowing stream tickling down the hill
like a snake finding its way through the long grass
the leafs littered the ground and with no ceiling
on the ruined church the rocks and soil was rather damp
when darkness fell the magical night had happened
and here is the poetic story of my camping night
UNDER THE GLOW OF THE FIRE
Under the cover of darkness
under the twinkling stars of the sky
we gathered around the camp fire
to give us warmth and light
I gazed into your diamond like green eyes
sparkling by the flickering of flames
do i see the glowing embrace of your
lush red hair stalking down your face
How i notice you concentrate on the
vibes of the music of the guitar
retuning it to clearly speak
of whats on your mind
the glow from the fire
reflects the paleness of
your light soft skin and
the ever loving smile
you have within
many days i have longed
for a night like this
to be within your company
just to hold your hand
and to listen to you sing
I placed my arms around you
and we slowly lean forward
for our lips to match together
under the twinkling stars
do we wait for dawn to break
we sit there alone with just
the two of us but to be in your
everlasting embrace is the momment
i will always treasure
Truly enjoyed reading this, loved what images it brought to mind.
Could imagine the feeling between you and the young lady. Could feel the darkness, see the sky and smell the fire.
Bravo Scary, Bravo!!!
you didnt write that
pedro27: you didnt write that
Did he say he did?.... I don't read anything where he claims to have written it or not.
pedro27: you didnt write that
So what if he didnt write it, whats the big deal?????? We happen to like his poems and enjoy it when he puts them on here. It is like a breath of fresh air
pedro27: you didnt write that
yes i didKHD100: Truly enjoyed reading this, loved what images it brought to mind.
Could imagine the feeling between you and the young lady. Could feel the darkness, see the sky and smell the fire.
Bravo Scary, Bravo!!!
thank youCould imagine the feeling between you and the young lady. Could feel the darkness, see the sky and smell the fire.
Bravo Scary, Bravo!!!
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we set up camp on a small wooded hill
were we found a little ruins of a church
with a fast flowing stream tickling down the hill
like a snake finding its way through the long grass
the leafs littered the ground and with no ceiling
on the ruined church the rocks and soil was rather damp
when darkness fell the magical night had happened
and here is the poetic story of my camping night
UNDER THE GLOW OF THE FIRE
Under the cover of darkness
under the twinkling stars of the sky
we gathered around the camp fire
to give us warmth and light
I gazed into your diamond like green eyes
sparkling by the flickering of flames
do i see the glowing embrace of your
lush red hair stalking down your face
How i notice you concentrate on the
vibes of the music of the guitar
retuning it to clearly speak
of whats on your mind
the glow from the fire
reflects the paleness of
your light soft skin and
the ever loving smile
you have within
many days i have longed
for a night like this
to be within your company
just to hold your hand
and to listen to you sing
I placed my arms around you
and we slowly lean forward
for our lips to match together
under the twinkling stars
do we wait for dawn to break
we sit there alone with just
the two of us but to be in your
everlasting embrace is the momment
i will always treasure