on the horizon (12)

Mar 15, 2011 5:28 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
on the horizon theres a glimpse
of what is to be seen from afar
a bright yellow ball appears
over a small barren hill
rising early from its slumber

Its power penetrates through
like a knife going through water
grasping on to the land with all
of what it can give its total power

a ball of mass which we call
the ball of fire that greets
us to our morning call a beautiful
sight is what most would recall

only when the evening hits
when it goes to rest do we see
the real profiled picture of its
departure to rise again and free
the standstill of darkness whats kept us
from our rise from slumber
Mar 15, 2011 5:33 PM CST on the horizon
tallman51
tallman51tallman51Limerick, Ireland9 Threads 1 Polls 3,327 Posts
Have you ever heard of Bob Dylan ??
He was writing better and more interesting stuff in 1961 !!
Mar 15, 2011 5:33 PM CST on the horizon
xxmissuniquexx
xxmissuniquexxxxmissuniquexxdublin, Dublin Ireland57 Threads 3 Polls 1,063 Posts
thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up as usual
Mar 15, 2011 5:43 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
xxmissuniquexx: as usual


thank you thumbs up kiss
Mar 15, 2011 5:44 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
tallman51: Have you ever heard of Bob Dylan ??
He was writing better and more interesting stuff in 1961 !!
well i would think so as im sure he had more experiance in writing than I
Mar 15, 2011 5:44 PM CST on the horizon
Good stuff!
Mar 15, 2011 5:47 PM CST on the horizon
tallman51
tallman51tallman51Limerick, Ireland9 Threads 1 Polls 3,327 Posts
scarwolve: well i would think so as im sure he had more experiance in writing than I


Please don't pick me up wrong !
If those are your own verses then I think they are Very good.
I like them a lot.

Keep up the good work.
We need guys like you in this country.
Mar 15, 2011 5:47 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
snowlynx: Good stuff!
thank you snow thumbs up
Mar 15, 2011 5:50 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
tallman51: Please don't pick me up wrong !
If those are your own verses then I think they are Very good.
I like them a lot.

Keep up the good work.
We need guys like you in this country.
lol but i do agree what i said :P im still trying to find my style lol

thank you very much for them words

hopefully though id gain to the talent of bob dylans laugh take a life time for me haha he may write a diffrent branch of poetry but hard not to respect his talentlaugh
Mar 15, 2011 5:53 PM CST on the horizon
tallman51
tallman51tallman51Limerick, Ireland9 Threads 1 Polls 3,327 Posts
scarwolve: lol but i do agree what i said :P im still trying to find my style lol

thank you very much for them words

hopefully though id gain to the talent of bob dylans take a life time for me haha he may write a diffrent branch of poetry but hard not to respect his talent


You will find your style I'm sure !!
You have style already by the looks of things.

Ever thought about writing songs ?
Mar 15, 2011 5:57 PM CST on the horizon
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
tallman51: You will find your style I'm sure !!
You have style already by the looks of things.

Ever thought about writing songs ?
i was asked that by a friend of mine i would like to try someday but it would be very hard as i would need to have a bit of musical playing for it to be graded well..its something i have not ever tired doing but in time when i gained a lil more i will attempt one

and thanks man maybe i do i may try see it lol
Mar 15, 2011 6:01 PM CST on the horizon
tallman51
tallman51tallman51Limerick, Ireland9 Threads 1 Polls 3,327 Posts
scarwolve: i was asked that by a friend of mine i would like to try someday but it would be very hard as i would need to have a bit of musical playing for it to be graded well..its something i have not ever tired doing but in time when i gained a lil more i will attempt one

and thanks man maybe i do i may try see it lol


I think you could make a very good song writer.
There's some great music software out there now and you would be able to make your own backing with them.
Reason 4 is a great music program. You can do anything with it.

I wish you the best of luck for the future.
Maybe I will see you on the box some night !!
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