a new poem by me (2)

Oct 13, 2006 12:31 AM CST a new poem by me
jasonj666
jasonj666jasonj666newport, Gwent, Wales UK29 Threads 1,226 Posts
i know yor all probably fed up with reading my sad poems but i wrote a new one and it makes me feel better posting them on here.
why am i the only one,
who never has any fun.
everyone i loves not here,
im realising my worst fear.
its doing my head in,
sitting round here.
same old thing,
year after year.
the woman i love,
i cant get.
i fell like im trapped,
trapped in a net.
this iskilling me,
i dont know what to do.
i wish i could start,
my life a-new.
i wish i could say,
just whats on my mind.
why is love for me,
so hard to find.
i feel the end is coming now,
thank god ive had enough.
i dont wish mypain on anyone,
for them it'll be too rough.


i know the ending is rubbish but i couldnt think of what to put on there.
Oct 13, 2006 5:02 AM CST a new poem by me
YamiYami
YamiYamiYamiYamiNorthWest, England UK30 Threads 1,252 Posts
Hi Jason , I remember it well . It is a nice poem . But if it is about you then you would like to know that it will happen and for most it will start with a bang and end with a whimper . With the right person you would not need to try and it will all go swimmingly . If you can not find what you want here then look outwards towards EU and beyond . We live in a very insecure nation . You can find warmth , friendship and love elsewhere too . If you are running for it then it is probably not the right one for you . It should meet you half way .
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