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Jul 27, 2005 11:13 AM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Enter my brightness
be washed in the feel
Of essential me
touch lightly, stroke
Pain clears away
acute senses
Trace each line
scar, mark
My total release
will be yours

by me
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Jul 30, 2005 1:06 AM CST Release
bassthumper
bassthumperbassthumpersan diego, USA2 Threads 3 Posts
that is REALLY nice!!! i felt every word!!
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Jul 30, 2005 8:05 AM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
well cool, thanks!
that's the idea...:)
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Jul 30, 2005 8:17 AM CST Release
thevisionary
thevisionarythevisionaryGarner, North Carolina USA20 Threads 460 Posts
TabooN, Profound in the realism of the scares that we endure through life and the hopes of the release back to a tranquil state of mind and body. I like that very much!
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Jul 30, 2005 8:20 AM CST Release
you just knock me over with your ability
to convey

that which is barely able to be said
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Aug 29, 2005 3:24 PM CST Release
joeedurt
joeedurtjoeedurtkingman, Arizona USA9 Threads 155 Posts
damn tab! awesome,your on a roll!ever think serious on doin a book?big smile!L88!
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Aug 29, 2005 3:27 PM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Trying to make me blush, you! lol

Yeah, I want to get them together by catagory and send them out...see what happens...edited obviously, lol. Spelling/typing sucks, heh.
thanks, hon.
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Aug 29, 2005 3:28 PM CST Release
cajunfroggy
cajunfroggycajunfroggyWaco, USA145 Threads 7,332 Posts
good stuff nene
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Aug 29, 2005 3:28 PM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
thanks hon.:)
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Sep 6, 2005 10:50 AM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
If I sighed just a bit louder
would you hear all that want
If you urged just a little bit more
would my desire be yours to haunt

If you tasted this
And, I touched upon that
To explore again and again

If we merged slowly
quickening frenzied end

And, I heard your heart beating
ever slow breathing
exhaulted resting flesh

If we shared this tomorrow
our heat we'll not borrow

Would we unto a journey afresh...
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Sep 15, 2005 6:08 AM CST Release
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Oh, relish this pain
so sweet, pure
Searing beautiful feeling
waste not, this
Raw, fresh addictive
recieve the bite
ecstasy, returns to me
the reality of you
No escape in minds hollows
here, present, feel
Exquisite release
heightened senses
Bring us back to now
precious pain
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