your glass of charms (8)

Mar 28, 2013 4:43 PM CST your glass of charms
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
Yearn for me as I yearn for you
you suspect my every move
condemn my very word
have I not proven myself to you

you depress the air around me
sapping my life from my bones
like a stick frozen in winters glare
you freeze me like icicles with your
paralysing glare

snagged at a dead end you pour
your charms into your wine glass
constantly snared into its evil trap
how horrible do you become

ferociously do you struggle
but have no fear I am here
bruise for bruise cant make
one forget the bond that connects

break down the emotional barriers
bring yourself to peace
lets talk through it together
so we can be at peace

yet you condemn my word
still no trust in me
have your glass of charms
your done with me

I enjoy my drink but its clear as day
you have lost to temptations
so no longer am I here to stay!!!!
Mar 28, 2013 4:58 PM CST your glass of charms
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
scarwolve: Yearn for me as I yearn for you
you suspect my every move
condemn my very word
have I not proven myself to you

you depress the air around me
sapping my life from my bones
like a stick frozen in winters glare
you freeze me like icicles with your
paralysing glare

snagged at a dead end you pour
your charms into your wine glass
constantly snared into its evil trap
how horrible do you become

ferociously do you struggle
but have no fear I am here
bruise for bruise cant make
one forget the bond that connects

break down the emotional barriers
bring yourself to peace
lets talk through it together
so we can be at peace

yet you condemn my word
still no trust in me
have your glass of charms
your done with me

I enjoy my drink but its clear as day
you have lost to temptations
so no longer am I here to stay!!!!


I hope you didn't stay.

Very sad and fluid in the telling.

thumbs up
Mar 28, 2013 5:00 PM CST your glass of charms
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
Fraya: I hope you didn't stay.

Very sad and fluid in the telling.


Excuse pun...or not laugh
Mar 28, 2013 5:02 PM CST your glass of charms
facetowardsfront
facetowardsfrontfacetowardsfrontCork, Ireland42 Threads 1 Polls 2,921 Posts
This is a nice poem for the new Pope.

Mar 28, 2013 5:07 PM CST your glass of charms
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
Fraya: Excuse pun...or not
i dedicated this poem to loved ones not from my personal experiances but from what ive observed its a poem to reach out to those who have gone through this situation

many would say how i can write about something i havent gone through myself i use research observation and imagination place myself in a situation on how id act and think and evaluated it into a poem were i can express a certain range of experiences and emotion we all seen loved ones who are slipping to temptations of alcohol just different areas of severity i have never experianced a case like ive explained here would be a more tame one so this poem goes out to those who had a rough patch and witnessed a loved one destroy themselves
Mar 28, 2013 5:15 PM CST your glass of charms
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
scarwolve: i dedicated this poem to loved ones not from my personal experiances but from what ive observed its a poem to reach out to those who have gone through this situation

many would say how i can write about something i havent gone through myself i use research observation and imagination place myself in a situation on how id act and think and evaluated it into a poem were i can express a certain range of experiences and emotion we all seen loved ones who are slipping to temptations of alcohol just different areas of severity i have never experianced a case like ive explained here would be a more tame one so this poem goes out to those who had a rough patch and witnessed a loved one destroy themselves


I assumed it was a parent and not a partner/lover. I dont know why..your age I guess. What prompted you to post it?
Mar 28, 2013 5:27 PM CST your glass of charms
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
Fraya: I assumed it was a parent and not a partner/lover. I dont know why..your age I guess. What prompted you to post it?
remember hearing stories of it from people i know what they experianced happening(ive a friend who works behind a bar family run bar), read about it and watched on tv alot of people have experianced it just alot are shy about exposing it to others

however sometimes if you walk by bars very early in the day you can see it around or if you have a regular pub by getting to know some of them you can see it aswell
Mar 28, 2013 5:47 PM CST your glass of charms
Fraya
FrayaFrayaCork, Ireland1 Threads 3,762 Posts
scarwolve: remember hearing stories of it from people i know what they experianced happening(ive a friend who works behind a bar family run bar), read about it and watched on tv alot of people have experianced it just alot are shy about exposing it to others

however sometimes if you walk by bars very early in the day you can see it around or if you have a regular pub by getting to know some of them you can see it aswell


Need to wear a tin foil hat around you I think laugh
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