my poem, and what it means (26)
can anybody else relate????
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thanks for sharing and yes i can relate
always dreaming and always hoping for the best
always dreaming and always hoping for the best
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thanks for sharing and yes i can relate
always dreaming and always hoping for the best
always dreaming and always hoping for the best
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my journey
as i journey through life
there is but one thing missing
and thats undieing love
have so much to give and so much to show
i need to say what i feel about
this journey that i hope to share
words cant say what i can give or show
but i will say with time will tell
i know how i feel but cant bring myself to say
and it rips me apart not knowing how and when to say
this is my journey that i hope has came to and end
you know your in my heart
so were does it go from here
with you leading the way it cant go wrong
when the two of us miss each other
there has to be something there
so please help take my journey
and show me the way to your heart
to let a new one begin
by duce
as i journey through life
there is but one thing missing
and thats undieing love
have so much to give and so much to show
i need to say what i feel about
this journey that i hope to share
words cant say what i can give or show
but i will say with time will tell
i know how i feel but cant bring myself to say
and it rips me apart not knowing how and when to say
this is my journey that i hope has came to and end
you know your in my heart
so were does it go from here
with you leading the way it cant go wrong
when the two of us miss each other
there has to be something there
so please help take my journey
and show me the way to your heart
to let a new one begin
by duce
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duce, thats beautiful man
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hope she likes it
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she will i promise man what woman can resist that??
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can we say hottie???
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thats what im hoping for the poems are coming back to me its all thats in my heart and there so true of my life
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thats all it takes for true love one big heart like u have duce... u got it made man
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Sounds gothic, well done.
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I am weak, help me be strong.
When I am right and when I am wrong..
Please help me see what I should be.
I need someone to believe in me.
Inspire my soul,
With a love that is whole.
That sees what I need.
Who can plant that seed
That seed to start who I can be.
To show the world who’s really “me”
Allowed to grow in stable ground.
Strong, solid, sturdy and sound.
Surviving the pressures the world brings upon,
And growing in strength as time passes on.
Teach me how to be confident.
Guide me with wise influence.
Be someone I can always trust.
This you see, is an absolute must.
Without trust there is no structure.
Everything’s in doubt and intentions unsure.
Cultivate the best qualities in me,
That maybe I am too blind to see.
So I can feel my heart and soul,
To be a person that is whole.
Lene'
When I am right and when I am wrong..
Please help me see what I should be.
I need someone to believe in me.
Inspire my soul,
With a love that is whole.
That sees what I need.
Who can plant that seed
That seed to start who I can be.
To show the world who’s really “me”
Allowed to grow in stable ground.
Strong, solid, sturdy and sound.
Surviving the pressures the world brings upon,
And growing in strength as time passes on.
Teach me how to be confident.
Guide me with wise influence.
Be someone I can always trust.
This you see, is an absolute must.
Without trust there is no structure.
Everything’s in doubt and intentions unsure.
Cultivate the best qualities in me,
That maybe I am too blind to see.
So I can feel my heart and soul,
To be a person that is whole.
Lene'
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that was awsome loved it so deep
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hey lion beautiful my dear u are a hottie
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It was a very painful time in my life and it just flowed out. I have been told by many people that it describes them too. Thank you very much for the compliment. I very much enjoyed your poem too!..
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LOL...FRESH!
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yppers
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yes it is and this is her thread
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she is a shadow
searching-
black rooms
for a rose petal
as mirrored bars
tease her
with spring's bloomed rose
a river storms her heart
as she crawls through shattered glass
and her fingers grasp
bloody thorns-
images turn to windows
as red, streaks
the image of his face
on the other side
to me, well this is kind of my story, always working my way to my dreams, always hoping, going through so much pain and turmoil, and then just when i think i have it, there is something standing between me and what i long for...
i hope so much that i've made my way to the end of the journey... i wrote this about ten years ago, and it has still been highly relevant in my life.... until recently, i hope....
i hope to touch the man of my dreams and not the glass that stands between us.