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Jun 14, 2015 7:30 PM CST I need help! Easy
Pedropt
PedroptPedroptBurnaby, British Columbia Canada1 Threads 3 Posts
I writed a cover letter in English, but I don't know if have errors, or bad phrases.
I'm asking for correct or just tell a opinion
Is small (12 lines) and for who is Native American will be easy..

I wanna work, and this really can decide it. Anyone help? I'm Portuguese

I will not put here, but we can talk and I send by email..

So, thanks for all in the same
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Jun 14, 2015 8:13 PM CST I need help! Easy
Dewiqueen
DewiqueenDewiqueenSomewhere, Jakarta Indonesia114 Posts
Hi Pedropthandshake
you may try online English course, it's quite easy I thought.
good luck
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Jun 14, 2015 8:49 PM CST I need help! Easy
Was just thinking....

If you get someone to help you out at this point, and they are not there to help out later... it may make you look worse. Eventually, your future conversations/writings will tell the other person you are applying to that the first was not of true character.

Just my thinking... but good luck, and best wishes in your success.

~JOHN~ thumbs up
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Jun 15, 2015 6:11 PM CST I need help! Easy
Pedropt
PedroptPedroptBurnaby, British Columbia Canada1 Threads 3 Posts
This cover letter was for a native Portuguese, and that's the language more important for this poste, but I was not accept. Thanks for the comments. I appreciate the advices and words of educated people!
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