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Jan 3, 2007 5:15 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
xxicexx
xxicexxxxicexxi forget, Georgia USA5 Threads 220 Posts
Your Beauty


When some think of beauty
They think of a rose
Or maybe a person
With just the right clothes

Yet some define beauty
As what's seen by the eye
And not true beauty
That is found deep inside

For you beauty is not
Just what I can see
But the way I feel
When you smile at me

Your beauty is something
That will always last
And in my eyes
Can never be surpassed

In your face, your body
And also your mind
The beauty I see in you
Never again will I find

Your beautiful face
Plays only a part
Of the beauty I see
From deep within your heart

The beauty you show me
Was only in dreams
With you I have seen
What true beauty means

Words alone on a page
Fail to have what it takes
I only need see you
And leave the rest to fate:
cheers
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Jan 3, 2007 6:03 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
Ntxred
NtxredNtxredCeleste, USA35 Threads 486 Posts
very nice! Have you ever entered into the poetry.com contests? I tend to write poems when I am down or depressed, so most of mine are sad ones.
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Jan 3, 2007 6:10 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
Very lovely poem wine
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Jan 3, 2007 7:00 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
xxicexx
xxicexxxxicexxi forget, Georgia USA5 Threads 220 Posts
when i was younger i had 12 poems put it a magazine from blue mountain poetry.But it is not the same as when you are writing it for someone special.
And ty
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Jan 3, 2007 7:00 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
FallinAngel1
FallinAngel1FallinAngel1Fairfield, USA16 Threads 1,945 Posts
very nice..
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Jan 3, 2007 7:03 PM CST letting your poem talk for you, for people who can write it better then they say it
xxicexx
xxicexxxxicexxi forget, Georgia USA5 Threads 220 Posts
An Angels Voice

In this world every lonely man,
looks for a lady to hold his hand.

A woman that is sweet and true,
one that will lift him up when he's feeling blue.

I have searched this world far and wide,
but these feelings for true love I still cann't find.

Today I heard an Angel's voice,
and I knew I had to make a choice.

Could she be the one I searched for so long?
the one I could trust with these feelings so strong.

Her voice was sweet and mild,
that of princess as well as a child.

My heart raced as she whispered my name,
such gentle words a roaring lion she could tame.

Could this be the one I have longed for,
a woman I could love forever more?

I'm not sure how last this will last,
or if these feelings will soon pass.

All I know is how she makes me feel.
I only pray that she is real.
blushing
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