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Mar 12, 2022 3:04 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,
But being too happy in thine happiness,—
That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees
In some melodious plot
Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,
Singest of summer in full-throated ease.

There, now don't you feel better for that? rose
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Mar 12, 2022 3:18 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
KarloradoFL
KarloradoFLKarloradoFLDeLeon Springs, Florida USA50 Threads 3 Polls 9,475 Posts
Circlip: My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,
But being too happy in thine happiness,—
That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees
In some melodious plot
Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,
Singest of summer in full-throated ease.

There, now don't you feel better for that?
"I drank what?" Socrates rolling on the floor laughing
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Mar 12, 2022 3:34 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Mercedes_00
Mercedes_00Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales Australia18 Threads 20,446 Posts
Circlip: My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,
But being too happy in thine happiness,—
That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees
In some melodious plot
Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,
Singest of summer in full-throated ease.

There, now don't you feel better for that?
Put this piece on the poem forum hug
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Mar 12, 2022 3:38 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
Mercedes_00: Put this piece on the poem forum
It's a bit too lovey dovey in there for me, Merc. smile hug
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Mar 12, 2022 3:57 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip: I daresay I would if I was as uncouth as you.
please write some more poetry...............best laugh i,ve had for weeks......grin grin grin
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Mar 12, 2022 3:59 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
truheart1941: please write some more poetry
What do you mean, "some more"? I haven't written any. confused
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Mar 12, 2022 4:23 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
Circlip: What do you mean, "some more"? I haven't written any.
rolling on the floor laughing the truth is much funnier.
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Mar 19, 2022 5:54 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
No chord of music has yet been found
To even equal that sweet sound
Which to my mind all else surpasses:
The clink of ice in crystal glasseswine
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Mar 19, 2022 6:37 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
rohaan:
The clink of ice in crystal glasses
O, for a draught of vintage! that hath been
Cool'd a long age in the deep-delved earth,
Tasting of Flora and the country green,
Dance, and Provençal song, and sunburnt mirth!
O for a beaker full of the warm South,
Full of the true, the blushful Hippocrene,
With beaded bubbles winking at the brim,
And purple-stained mouth;
That I might drink, and leave the world unseen,
And with thee fade away into the forest dim: wine
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Mar 19, 2022 10:32 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip: O, for a draught of vintage! that hath been
Cool'd a long age in the deep-delved earth,
Tasting of Flora and the country green,
Dance, and Provençal song, and sunburnt mirth!
O for a beaker full of the warm South,
Full of the true, the blushful Hippocrene,
With beaded bubbles winking at the brim,
And purple-stained mouth;
That I might drink, and leave the world unseen,
And with thee fade away into the forest dim:
When I am dead, and ‘neath the peat—
Lay a jug of punch at me head and feet-
And say a word ‘bout this han’some rover-
Whiskey was ‘is darlin’-
Drunk or sober!
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Mar 19, 2022 3:48 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
LmiDkC
LmiDkCLmiDkCGlew, Buenos Aires Argentina4 Threads 1 Polls 63 Posts
I once joineth a dating a site
In the hopes I wille meeth
A special somebodie.

Instead I found a bum who used me
and still lived with his mom.
What a tragedie.

I should have knoweth better
What u join for free
Will cost you and arm and a leggie.
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Mar 19, 2022 4:29 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
KarloradoFL
KarloradoFLKarloradoFLDeLeon Springs, Florida USA50 Threads 3 Polls 9,475 Posts
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Mar 19, 2022 10:19 PM CST Let's pause for poetry.
LmiDkC: I once joineth a dating a site
In the hopes I wille meeth
A special somebodie.

Instead I found a bum who used me
and still lived with his mom.
What a tragedie.

I should have knoweth better
What u join for free
Will cost you and arm and a leggie.
What a canopy a King Cobra possesses. Gorgeous, brilliantly colored and arrayed; quiet. Yet so ungodly deadly. Many have conceded that the King Cobra is here to teach acuity in awareness. Learn it. A wise man once said there is only one in a hundred men who are noble, kind, honest, and fair. This is an understatement. Be careful.
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Mar 20, 2022 6:33 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Tulefell
TulefellTulefellGothenburg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden104 Threads 5 Polls 3,306 Posts
LmiDkC: I once joineth a dating a site
In the hopes I wille meeth
A special somebodie.

Instead I found a bum who used me
and still lived with his mom.
What a tragedie.

I should have knoweth better
What u join for free
Will cost you and arm and a leggie.
That's good thumbs up
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Mar 20, 2022 6:44 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Tulefell
TulefellTulefellGothenburg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden104 Threads 5 Polls 3,306 Posts
Circlip: Is that Shakespeare, Tulefell?
It's Pearshake, Circlip :)
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Mar 20, 2022 6:47 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
Tulefell: It's Pearshake, Circlip :)
Is that a type of poetry, or a fruity drink? smile
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Mar 20, 2022 6:56 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Tulefell
TulefellTulefellGothenburg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden104 Threads 5 Polls 3,306 Posts
Circlip: Is that a type of poetry, or a fruity drink?
Well... as you asked.

There was a hype on the Russian part of net a few years ago, called "Pirozhok" (plural "Pirozhki"). A type of 4-liners that meets some special requirements, of with I remember only some:

* Iambic meter
* No rhythm
* No punctuation (I violated this one)
* No capitals (I violated this one too)
* No profanity

There was a lot of pearls, a total pleasure if you are into this type of literature. I am and I tried my pen too. Without success :)
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Mar 20, 2022 7:26 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
Tulefell: Well... as you asked.

There was a hype on the Russian part of net a few years ago, called "Pirozhok" (plural "Pirozhki"). A type of 4-liners that meets some special requirements, of with I remember only some:

* Iambic meter
* No rhythm
* No punctuation (I violated this one)
* No capitals (I violated this one too)
* No profanity

There was a lot of pearls, a total pleasure if you are into this type of literature. I am and I tried my pen too. Without success :)
It just shows that it is possible to get a meaningful answer from a flippant question, Tule. thumbs up

It's much more usual for it to be the other way round. sigh
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Mar 20, 2022 7:40 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Tulefell
TulefellTulefellGothenburg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden104 Threads 5 Polls 3,306 Posts
Well... as a poet once said:

Everybody chooses for himself
His religion, loyalties and women.
Service to a prophet, or a demon,
Everybody chooses for himself.

Everybody chooses on his own
The word for loving and the word for praying,
A dueling foil, a sword for dragonslaying.
Everybody chooses on his own.

Everybody takes what fits him best
In shield and armor, walking staff and sandals,
In the final jury, judge and sentence,
Everybody takes what fits him best.

Everybody chooses for himself,
I, too, try the best I can envision.
I blame no-one else for my decisions.
Everybody chooses for himself.

Yury Levitansky (1976)
Translated by Tanya Wolfson
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Mar 20, 2022 9:42 AM CST Let's pause for poetry.
Circlip
CirclipCirclipNottingham, Nottinghamshire, England UK22 Threads 826 Posts
Tulefell: Well... as a poet once said:

Everybody chooses for himself
His religion, loyalties and women.
Service to a prophet, or a demon,
Everybody chooses for himself.

Everybody chooses on his own
The word for loving and the word for praying,
A dueling foil, a sword for dragonslaying.
Everybody chooses on his own.

Everybody takes what fits him best
In shield and armor, walking staff and sandals,
In the final jury, judge and sentence,
Everybody takes what fits him best.

Everybody chooses for himself,
I, too, try the best I can envision.
I blame no-one else for my decisions.
Everybody chooses for himself.

Yury Levitansky (1976)
Translated by Tanya Wolfson
Quite a bit in there to think about, if you take the trouble. hmmm
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