I'd Only Just Surrendered. (13)

May 20, 2022 10:27 AM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.





bouquet
May 20, 2022 2:41 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
Nicethumbs up
May 20, 2022 2:46 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
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Surrender to win

yay
May 20, 2022 2:59 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers: You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
lovelybouquet
May 20, 2022 3:34 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers: You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.


wave
May 20, 2022 4:04 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
mbken: Nice
Thanks Ken wine
May 20, 2022 4:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
bodleing2: Surrender to win
you know it. wave beer
May 20, 2022 4:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
Funnybunnybaby: lovely
Thank you smile
May 20, 2022 4:06 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
secretagent09: And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.
Yeah, it can go either way. cool
May 20, 2022 4:32 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
May 21, 2022 4:43 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
May 21, 2022 4:47 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
secretagent09: And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.
I like this Secret. Yes there are some memories better forgotten. sad flower
May 21, 2022 8:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
Everyone sees it their way, which often isn't at all what I intended in the writing. Diversity of perception lives! gift
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