I'd Only Just Surrendered. ( Archived) (13)

May 20, 2022 9:27 AM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.





bouquet
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May 20, 2022 1:41 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
Nicethumbs up
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May 20, 2022 1:46 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
bodleing2
bodleing2bodleing2Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK84 Threads 6,132 Posts
Surrender to win

yay
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May 20, 2022 1:59 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
Funnybunnybaby
FunnybunnybabyFunnybunnybabyWeymouth, Dorset, England UK2 Threads 2,628 Posts
BB_snickers: You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
lovelybouquet
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May 20, 2022 2:34 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
secretagent09
secretagent09secretagent09New Jersey Girl in, North Carolina USA198 Threads 4 Polls 7,230 Posts
BB_snickers: You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.


wave
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May 20, 2022 3:04 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
mbken: Nice
Thanks Ken wine
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May 20, 2022 3:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
bodleing2: Surrender to win
you know it. wave beer
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May 20, 2022 3:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
Funnybunnybaby: lovely
Thank you smile
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May 20, 2022 3:06 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
secretagent09: And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.
Yeah, it can go either way. cool
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May 20, 2022 3:32 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
KarloradoFL
KarloradoFLKarloradoFLDeLeon Springs, Florida USA50 Threads 3 Polls 9,475 Posts
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May 21, 2022 3:43 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
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May 21, 2022 3:47 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
secretagent09: And then remember all the reasons why we are not together and I feel at peace again.
I like this Secret. Yes there are some memories better forgotten. sad flower
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May 21, 2022 7:05 PM CST I'd Only Just Surrendered.
BB_snickers
BB_snickersBB_snickersNarnia, Ontario Canada56 Threads 3,755 Posts
Everyone sees it their way, which often isn't at all what I intended in the writing. Diversity of perception lives! gift
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