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a very nice one Excellent job!!
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Quite impressive for a first effort.
Or a second, or third, or fifth.
Good job. Don't stop now!
Or a second, or third, or fifth.
Good job. Don't stop now!
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The sky smiles at me whenever I look up
Warm, passionate, breathing, lively sky
Resembling my emotions on a high
I have known you for quite some time but only now
Have I realized how I long for your embrace
Your tender loving eyes filling empty space
You make me want to laugh out loud
Sing and dance and tell the whole world
I have found you and, dreams I can build
All my previous loves cannot measure up to you
They do not possess your kind heart, deep soul
You have made my distrusting heart whole
Will you believe me when I say I love you
Did so for a very long time without realizing
My heart belongs to you always until dying
Do I stand a chance, I don’t know
You high up there, me down below
Will my love ever have a chance to glow
Talking to you late at night, in morning light
Hoping the wind shall carry my voice
Waiting for a sign hoping I’m your choice
I tell myself that today will be the day
My love might finally be answered
Only to find myself hopelessly scattered
If you want me, I’m yours for the taking
Never will I make you regret, doubt or question
Never ever will I make you, my love suffer rejection
This was my first poem I ever wrote