Paschendale ( Archived) (2)

Jul 12, 2007 1:33 PM CST Paschendale
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classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
Paschendale

going down, going down
drowning in the quagmire
the smell of fear falling with the rain
half a million lives stretched and destroyed
in four miles of disputed land
reaching down through the years
lifeless bodies screaming
draped from the wire
friend and foe
united in death
pressed by pretentious aims
it remains
a heart rending indictment
crying into the wind
of arrogant persistence
and suicidal attrition
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Jul 12, 2007 9:33 PM CST Paschendale
starynight
starynightstarynightlakeview, Oregon USA3 Threads 382 Posts
Have you ever written a book.... I'm wondering here....
you should.... you are very good....
your use of words ... is well done......
fighting over land ...and the death from it ... is my take.....

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