going down, going down drowning in the quagmire the smell of fear falling with the rain half a million lives stretched and destroyed in four miles of disputed land reaching down through the years lifeless bodies screaming draped from the wire friend and foe united in death pressed by pretentious aims it remains a heart rending indictment crying into the wind of arrogant persistence and suicidal attrition
Have you ever written a book.... I'm wondering here.... you should.... you are very good.... your use of words ... is well done...... fighting over land ...and the death from it ... is my take.....
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going down, going down
drowning in the quagmire
the smell of fear falling with the rain
half a million lives stretched and destroyed
in four miles of disputed land
reaching down through the years
lifeless bodies screaming
draped from the wire
friend and foe
united in death
pressed by pretentious aims
it remains
a heart rending indictment
crying into the wind
of arrogant persistence
and suicidal attrition