Path to Night (4)
Wow, and a good evening to you. Thank you
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I like this! I like the imagery you present - darkness becoming a gentle broom collecting light like dust - that is a very powerful image and the sweeping metaphor continued into the claring away of the day's experiences, each one of them becoming equal neither good nor bad within the darkness of the night-excellent reading.
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a gentle broom
collecting light like dust
clearing away
the day
and all its moments
the joy, the pain
hunger, thirst
the laughter
and the memory
of kisses
Stars emerge,
a diamond net
that rings the world
marking the path
that leads
to night and all
its satisfactions
as yet unnamed
just dreamed of
in the day's musings.
Good evening to you all.