Twilight transition ( Archived) (4)

Aug 6, 2007 6:13 PM CST Twilight transition
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Twilight brings half light and
silhouettes against the clouds
mere traceries of life
that boomed and strutted
in the sun;
all quiet now
as lady Night
unfurls her parasol
and soothes the land
with shadow.
A gentle time of night scent
potent on the air
a fragrant breath
too delicate for day
too subtle for the brazen
noonday sky
but perfect now
a mist, a trace
across the lips
closing over
secrets as the
Lady walks abroad.
------ This thread is Archived ------
Aug 6, 2007 6:20 PM CST Twilight transition
Spartan73
Spartan73Spartan73Mersyside, Merseyside, England UK22 Threads 1,206 Posts
hug
------ This thread is Archived ------
Aug 6, 2007 6:21 PM CST Twilight transition
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thanks! hug
------ This thread is Archived ------
Aug 6, 2007 7:12 PM CST Twilight transition
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
a lovely analogy. I will now relish the soothing
parasol and the delicate night scent even more
applause
------ This thread is Archived ------
Post Comment - Post a comment on this Forum Thread

This Thread is Archived

This Thread is archived, so you will no longer be able to post to it. Threads get archived automatically when they are older than 3 months.

« Go back to All Threads
Message #318

Stats for this Thread

561 Views
3 Comments
by bajanblue (344 Threads)
Created: Aug 2007
Last Viewed: Apr 20
Last Commented: Aug 2007

Share this Thread

We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here