Lose you, win me ( Archived) (11)

Sep 10, 2007 10:35 PM CST Lose you, win me
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Ice cream tastes of salt
when tears make sprinkles;
gentle rain across a cheek
will make a tear a secret
I will never tell, will never
talk to you again, will not
forget you, lose your number
one with me forever and a day
can be so long when we are
not together anymore
eyes fill and burn, smoke
always makes me cry
out loud, it is not you
I think about each time
I smile to see the sunrise
new day born without you
you are gone and I live on
forever.
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Sep 10, 2007 10:37 PM CST Lose you, win me
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
love is a funny thing, nice one.thumbs up
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Sep 10, 2007 10:38 PM CST Lose you, win me
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
applause She's back! And thank you.tip hat
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Sep 10, 2007 10:46 PM CST Lose you, win me
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Both funny peculiar and funny haha, I think. Glad you liked it.wave
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Sep 10, 2007 10:48 PM CST Lose you, win me
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
blushing It is nice to have been missed! I have to get my writing rhythm back now!wine
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Sep 10, 2007 10:57 PM CST Lose you, win me
tootiecutie
tootiecutietootiecutiePerth, Western Australia Australia7 Threads 88 Posts
Absolutey loved it.
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Sep 10, 2007 10:58 PM CST Lose you, win me
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
Very nice scribe my friend...wave

sigh
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Sep 10, 2007 11:03 PM CST Lose you, win me
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
applause applause applause applause nice one!!
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Sep 10, 2007 11:04 PM CST Lose you, win me
Thank you for a poem that reminds me of my son who's gone now.Well done.
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Sep 10, 2007 11:07 PM CST Lose you, win me
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
Hi sweet...Missed you here lately. wave
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Sep 11, 2007 8:01 AM CST Lose you, win me
Verthandi
VerthandiVerthandiAugusta, Maine USA9 Threads 87 Posts
Your words have been missed. Gentle and peaceful day to you, Bajanblue.
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