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Sep 20, 2007 7:20 AM CST Morning Heat
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
One drop of sweat has pearled,
a world
containing all my substance
just poised
to make a freedom run
and crash
onto the tiles, a sudden smash
of all my dreams
and every thought I ever had
will go,
evaporate, dispersing into air
a breath
for you to take, absorb and
know me
down to the DNA I shed
like tears in search of sorrow
to be healed.
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Sep 20, 2007 7:26 AM CST Morning Heat
skimpydoo
skimpydooskimpydooDublin, Ireland170 Threads 3 Polls 4,805 Posts
What a lovely poem up to your usual high standard.
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Sep 20, 2007 8:07 AM CST Morning Heat
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
In a strange mood this morning. Thank you.
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Sep 20, 2007 8:13 AM CST Morning Heat
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
As always, thank you tip hat
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