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Sep 26, 2007 7:15 PM CST Heart Strings
ibglenny
ibglennyibglennyNorfolk, Virginia USA10 Threads 245 Posts
I have been noticing a lot of people posting poetry ... GREAT stuff. So I thought I would post one of mine.


Heart strings


Deep in the corners of my memory

is a song that plays soft and sweet

Wooing me, calling me



To a love long past



It sways me smooth, it sways me now

It moves me still and I don't know how

Releasing this heart that was bound



The music of his heart strings



The hourglass of my being is again upturned

I forget the lessons that I learned

and go back beyond where my heart was burned



I am there again



Back where I am his heart and smile

and he loves me true, he loves me wild

I stay there just a little while



In the music of his heart strings



He holds me close and we are one

moving in rythm to the song

Making love under stars and sun



Our bodies the perfect fit



The harmony could never be more pure

The rhyme is perfect, the movement sure

This song, my pain's perfect cure



The music of our heart strings



I know that it cannot last

this little trip into the past

The powder runs dry in the hourglass



I must return to now



Again it's tucked away to hide

deep in the corner of my mind

until again it calls me to abide



In the music of his heart strings
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Sep 26, 2007 7:16 PM CST Heart Strings
Fallenangel74
Fallenangel74Fallenangel74southern, British Columbia Canada5 Threads 879 Posts
Nice. angel Liked it.
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Sep 26, 2007 7:22 PM CST Heart Strings
kinetiknrg
kinetiknrgkinetiknrgminneapolis, Minnesota USA6 Threads 294 Posts
That is good...you wrote that?
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Sep 26, 2007 7:24 PM CST Heart Strings
ibglenny
ibglennyibglennyNorfolk, Virginia USA10 Threads 245 Posts
Thank you ... yes.
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Sep 26, 2007 7:26 PM CST Heart Strings
RiverMountain
RiverMountainRiverMountainportland, Oregon USA4 Threads 79 Posts
I like to write poetry often myself. Everyone has been posting so many serious ones:) Here's one from about 15 years ago hehe.



Multifarious Splatters
by Jason (10th grade high school)

We had dogs of golden fur, yet
we had dogs of satin fleece,
we had dogs of tremendous size, and,
we had dogs of little lithe bodies.

We had dogs until the sunny morning,
we had dogs until the lanes were paved,
we had dogs until the highway opened,
we had dogs until the "semi's" came.

We had dogs until silver, then red tractors rolled over them,
we had dogs until their soft skulls were flattened,
we had dogs until the speeding death zoomed in,
we had dogs until metal grilles waffled their tender sides,
we had dogs until their bodies were torn apart,
we had dog carnage until the black buzzards arrived.

We had dogs until their deep, yielding, brown eyes, which looked up to a sixteen wheel, cold steel machine, were forcefully ground through their warm skulls, ending their puppy days: there were no more dogs.

We were left with multifarious splatters.



And can you believe I was asked by all my teachers to read that at our senior graduation....
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Sep 26, 2007 7:28 PM CST Heart Strings
Rickster
RicksterRicksterNew York, USA24 Threads 3,362 Posts
Thank You. applause
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Sep 26, 2007 8:36 PM CST Heart Strings
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
<The hourglass of my being is again upturned

I forget the lessons that I learned

and go back beyond where my heart was burned>


A very effective image and lovely statement.thumbs up
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Sep 26, 2007 8:38 PM CST Heart Strings
diogenes
diogenesdiogenesLongview, Texas USA69 Threads 7 Polls 4,761 Posts
Swoon!

smitten
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Sep 26, 2007 8:50 PM CST Heart Strings
Verthandi
VerthandiVerthandiAugusta, Maine USA9 Threads 87 Posts
This is beautiful ibglenny! I also really like the hourglass line...very nice writing. wine
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Sep 26, 2007 8:51 PM CST Heart Strings
modernday_cowboy
modernday_cowboymodernday_cowboyRoanoke, Virginia USA17 Threads 84 Posts
really nice!!!love
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Sep 27, 2007 12:34 AM CST Heart Strings
ibglenny
ibglennyibglennyNorfolk, Virginia USA10 Threads 245 Posts
Thank you everyone for the sweet words. hug
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Sep 27, 2007 12:38 AM CST Heart Strings
b_n_d
b_n_db_n_dGlasgow, USA60 Threads 3,675 Posts
Aww that was very nice. No quit going back there damn itscold rolling on the floor laughing
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Sep 27, 2007 12:41 AM CST Heart Strings
ibglenny
ibglennyibglennyNorfolk, Virginia USA10 Threads 245 Posts
laugh agreedhug
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Sep 27, 2007 12:55 AM CST Heart Strings
HeartsDesire61
HeartsDesire61HeartsDesire61Hernando, USA17 Threads 1 Polls 1,087 Posts
thumbs up drinking
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Sep 27, 2007 3:10 AM CST Heart Strings
Venus69
Venus69Venus69San Diego, California USA3 Threads 175 Posts
This Poem Really touched my Heart, Very Nice!!!! kiss
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Sep 27, 2007 10:36 AM CST Heart Strings
ibglenny
ibglennyibglennyNorfolk, Virginia USA10 Threads 245 Posts
Thank you Venuswave hug
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