You say your hearts gone cold ( Archived) (19)

Nov 11, 2007 7:56 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
You say your heart's gone cold
That you no longer have the ability to care
But I only see a heart of gold
Do I dare
To stay around and linger
With only one brush of your finger
I hang my head
For I have begun to fall
You say your heart is dead
But I hear the warmth within your heart's call
Everytime we speak on the phone
I want to tell you that you're not alone
When I hear your voice
I know that I've made the correct choice
I want to let you know how I feel
But I don't know if I can deal
I want to tell you of this little surprise
But I think I must stay in disguise
I know that your heart is not that cool
Or I will be proven to be the fool
I only want to make you smile
So I'm just going to wait for awhile
Before I show you your true core
Then I will prove to you so much more
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Nov 11, 2007 8:07 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Imaredneckwoman
ImaredneckwomanImaredneckwomanTroy, USA1,644 Posts
Don't want to go there sweetie. It hurts to much. My heart has been broken one to many times in my younger days. It's too cold now to have any feelings for anyone. crying


blues



moping
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Nov 11, 2007 8:08 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
cardsfan24
cardsfan24cardsfan24somewhere in paradise, Illinois USA40 Threads 1 Polls 5,169 Posts
hug comfort
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Nov 11, 2007 8:12 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Beautiful Dusty...hug
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Nov 11, 2007 8:16 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
cardsfan I will get back to you soon on that get together we are planning and thank you all for your comments yay hug
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Nov 11, 2007 8:19 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
Thank you I always enjoy your input on my poems!hug yay
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Nov 11, 2007 8:20 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
cardsfan24
cardsfan24cardsfan24somewhere in paradise, Illinois USA40 Threads 1 Polls 5,169 Posts
sounds, good i have plenty of time now...so just let me know and you know anytimehug
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Nov 11, 2007 8:23 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
Oh But that is not true I can't believe that. You can't cry if you can't feelcomfort
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Nov 11, 2007 8:34 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Imaredneckwoman
ImaredneckwomanImaredneckwomanTroy, USA1,644 Posts
The pain hon is to intense. Can't forget the pain. My heart is cold when someone tries to warm it. Other than that it stays warm. Grows cold when someone is trying to get close.
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Nov 11, 2007 8:39 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
mbcasey
mbcaseymbcaseyNorth Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA68 Threads 7 Polls 16,449 Posts
Very nice poem...I am with Mary...my heart has gone cold...moping
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Nov 11, 2007 8:41 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Imaredneckwoman
ImaredneckwomanImaredneckwomanTroy, USA1,644 Posts
hug
I'm sorry mbcasey.
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Nov 11, 2007 8:51 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
mbcasey
mbcaseymbcaseyNorth Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA68 Threads 7 Polls 16,449 Posts
Thankshug
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Nov 11, 2007 8:57 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Imaredneckwoman
ImaredneckwomanImaredneckwomanTroy, USA1,644 Posts
your welcome
handshake
comfort
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Nov 11, 2007 8:58 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Dknew
DknewDknewBarrington, New Hampshire USA262 Threads 10 Polls 7,077 Posts
Dusty some days I wish I felt like that but My heart still burns for someone.
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Nov 11, 2007 11:16 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
Dknew, This how he feels and I feel both. This person that this poem is about has told me the very first two lines of the poem himself. I just used his words and then wrote from it. I know that his heart isn't cold cause I know that he can still care. I just wish that he would open up! But that is only a wish and I know that he deserves happiness and that is all I want for him! Now let me say something if your heart still burns for someone why haven't you tryed to get back with them and tell them exactly how you feel!hug
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Nov 12, 2007 5:01 AM CST You say your hearts gone cold
Dknew
DknewDknewBarrington, New Hampshire USA262 Threads 10 Polls 7,077 Posts
I wish it was that easy Dusty and I wish you 2 the best of luck.
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Nov 13, 2007 9:57 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
Oh we aren't together its just that he is an old friend and I care for him and only want the best for him. He makes me think and I use his words at times for insperation for my poems. hug
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Nov 13, 2007 10:01 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
jean59
jean59jean59St Clair, New South Wales Australia5 Threads 87 Posts
wave enjoyed this very nicely done applause
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Nov 15, 2007 3:09 PM CST You say your hearts gone cold
DustyRose28
DustyRose28DustyRose28marshalltown, Iowa USA79 Threads 1,335 Posts
Thank you hug
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