beauty ( Archived) (31)

i was sitting here looking at the many pictures before me i came across one that deserves such recogonition oh for if only i could find these words that sheall describe her beauty a face like an angel eyes that twinkle like so many stars in the clear night sky a smile that would brighten anyones day a glow about her like th glow surrounding the mountains as the sun rises with each morning my heart began to flutter my breathing became almost heavy my mind became a jumbled mix of thoughts i ask why has this beauty been brought before me and i feel i must be blessed for one could only be truely blessed when brought before such rare beauty the type of beauty that makes life seem so much more the type of beauty that changes the way i shall look at life for in this moment i now know what and angel must truely look like for i have just seen the most pure and truely beautiful creature in this world for your image shall always remain etched into my thoughts


love?????

thanks barcode your not so bad yourself MUHAHAHAHAHA

Neither are you Vanity! Cutie- Muhahahaha as you say.

neither am i what does that mean BL?

Not so bad yourself!

why thank you BL same to you

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL..............

Your welcome lady.

Watch it, I might be tempted to drive down to San Diego and take you out for dinner or? lol. You are only two hours away you know, and half of that time would be spent just getting through Los Angeles County, lol.

I think he's talking about his baby...

No Jackie, I was referring to Vanity since she lives so close to me in reference to everyone else on the east coast side, or around and about there, lol.

who are you talking about barcode, or arent you allowed to say that, im confused and new to this lol

Oh Jackie,

Speaking about baby's, which one are you refering to, lol.

i am speaking to all the beautiful women no one specific that was actually a poem i wrote a long time ago that i expanded on added to the begining and end of it i have a couple poems published and have been asked a couple of times to write a book of them but most of the poetry i write i write on a spur of the moment for one person and they get the only copy of it but this one i thought i would give to all the beautiful ladies on this site if there is anyone that would like a poem either for them selves or for them to give to another i would be happy to write one for them all you have to do is ask

Thoughts of love whisper through my mind.

Days pass quickly without end.

Will I find her?


Hows that for a quicky?

the thoughts of you are like sweet memories coming to me in a dream for such beauity rarely crosses my path and when such rare beauty comes i feel i must grab hold and not let go for the inspiration that you give me makes my words sound so sweet forthe come truely from my heart with the pounding which you bring and the fluttering of my breath i strugle to put to voice the words to describe your beauty as i realize that no words could ever do your beauty justice




i liked yours but try this on for size

I struggle with anticipation whenever you are away.
Sleepless nights with memories of your angelic face.
Your loss is a pain no mortal should carry.
God deliver my love to me.


Any better?

with these words i shall ever speak of your sorrow i shall ever speak of your pain now i ask of you one thing do shut me out for in this life i was put before you for a reason and i do believe that i am here to fill the void left in your heart replace the painwith joy and to fill your sorrow with happiness and i shall shower you with kisses and hold you in my arms i shall offer you words without meaning and yet with such meaning i will offer an ear for you to spill your thoughts into i shall offer you my heart and soul till death do us part

that was good what do you think of that

Pretty nice. You sparked my love for poetry. I didn't see the thread section until you posted yours.

I use to write poems and songs when I was younger but, now most have been lost.

The only thing that throws me off is your post looks like one huge sentence.

Unfortunalty proper grammar isn't one of my strong points.

I know there are some "proper" poem formats but, I follow what I like and could care less most of the time unless it was being graded.

I just wrote another but, I think I'll save this one for someone.

I think this section needs more posting.