yet another sunset (15)
It's good to know you have sulking trees out there, too, Bajan (mine not only sulk; right now they're also throwing things)
I especially liked that gleaming wavelet stroking the furrows out of the sand...
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Ambrose2007: It's good to know you have sulking trees out there, too, Bajan (mine not only sulk; right now they're also throwing things)
I especially liked that gleaming wavelet stroking the furrows out of the sand...
I especially liked that gleaming wavelet stroking the furrows out of the sand...
I have caught ours throwingf stuff around from time to time. The colours tonight were truly phenomenally intense.
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mmmmm brings such lovely visions of sunsets shared with friends on Benniras beach, listening to the drummers drum the sun from the sky...
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I really enjoy reading your stuff, blue.
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j_goose: I really enjoy reading your stuff, blue.
Thanks goose, I make a point of checking your blogs out too. great stuff.
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jbibiza: listening to the drummers drum the sun from the sky...
Great line! wish I had written it.
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Wiah it was only sunset time here 
It's almost midnight instead and I need to be up for work in 5 and a half hours
So, good poem Bajan
& 
It's almost midnight instead and I need to be up for work in 5 and a half hours
So, good poem Bajan
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Zellarrone1: Wiah it was only sunset time here
It's almost midnight instead and I need to be up for work in 5 and a half hours
So, good poem Bajan &
It's almost midnight instead and I need to be up for work in 5 and a half hours
So, good poem Bajan &
I mean wish not wiah, by my spelling looks like I'm in zombie
mode already 
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bajanblue: Tonight they painted sunset
with a lavish hand
splashing red across the blue
to make a lavender so deep
the sea was jealous
shining greenly in the half light
spilled from the rushing sun
as he headed to his early
morning rendezvous
around the corner of the world.
Trees sulked in silhouette,
their colour gone as light
retreated, dragging day
behind it dropping little sparkles
soon diminished, on its way.
I paused to watch
a gleaming wavelet as
it stroked the sand,
smoothing all the furrows
of the day to nothing
as I used to stroke your forehead
just before I kissed you,
prelude to the night
with a lavish hand
splashing red across the blue
to make a lavender so deep
the sea was jealous
shining greenly in the half light
spilled from the rushing sun
as he headed to his early
morning rendezvous
around the corner of the world.
Trees sulked in silhouette,
their colour gone as light
retreated, dragging day
behind it dropping little sparkles
soon diminished, on its way.
I paused to watch
a gleaming wavelet as
it stroked the sand,
smoothing all the furrows
of the day to nothing
as I used to stroke your forehead
just before I kissed you,
prelude to the night
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Wow. I always seem to type wow in response to your prose for some reason. 
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around the corner of the world. So Universal 
Love every word, parallels of comparishments. You are the Queen of Colors.
Truly beautiful
btw according on describing weather condition (red sun and stuff) it is going to be a fine day tomorrow in your Kingdom. Enjoy!
Love every word, parallels of comparishments. You are the Queen of Colors.
Truly beautiful
btw according on describing weather condition (red sun and stuff) it is going to be a fine day tomorrow in your Kingdom. Enjoy!
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bajanblue: Great line! wish I had written it.
It's not just a line, it's a reality... such an amazing experience, about 10 to 20 drummers show up on the beach every evening to say goodbye to the sun and welcome the moon, and after the sun slips completely away the fire dancers start... it's magic
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bajanblue: Great line! wish I had written it.
thank you, coming from someone who uses words as beautifully as you, it means a lot.
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with a lavish hand
splashing red across the blue
to make a lavender so deep
the sea was jealous
shining greenly in the half light
spilled from the rushing sun
as he headed to his early
morning rendezvous
around the corner of the world.
Trees sulked in silhouette,
their colour gone as light
retreated, dragging day
behind it dropping little sparkles
soon diminished, on its way.
I paused to watch
a gleaming wavelet as
it stroked the sand,
smoothing all the furrows
of the day to nothing
as I used to stroke your forehead
just before I kissed you,
prelude to the night