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May 5, 2008 8:08 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.
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May 5, 2008 8:11 AM CST Love is...
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
ouch
now im sad


laugh

hi BB
i love you

grin
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May 5, 2008 8:13 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
mindfful: ouch
now im sad

hi BB
i love you


'Morning!

Reality has sharp edges to let us know we are alive!laugh

Love ya!wave
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May 5, 2008 8:14 AM CST Love is...
kurzita
kurzitakurzitaXaghra, Gozo Malta9 Threads 1,019 Posts
Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....


bouquet
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May 5, 2008 8:16 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
kurzita: Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....
thumbs up

tornados sweep the dust
away from explanations
leaving love the mystery
it was always meant to be.
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May 5, 2008 8:17 AM CST Love is...
Scottishlass
ScottishlassScottishlassKnoxville, Tennessee USA491 Threads 23 Polls 3,324 Posts
bajanblue: Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.
Beautifully expressed
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May 5, 2008 8:18 AM CST Love is...
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
You've certainly captured the endless split seconds of it in this piece. I was almost holding my breath reading it...........and remembering..................applause applause applause
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May 5, 2008 8:21 AM CST Love is...
kurzita
kurzitakurzitaXaghra, Gozo Malta9 Threads 1,019 Posts
One will ALWAYS remeber love.

Thank u Bajan.....

kiss
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May 5, 2008 8:24 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
gingerb: You've certainly captured the endless split seconds of it in this piece. I was almost holding my breath reading it...........and remembering..................


"endless split seconds of it.." lovely phrase. You could build palaces of love on that!wave
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May 5, 2008 8:33 AM CST Love is...
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
kurzita: Aaahhhhhh.....Love.....

That which all of us crave....

it comes when it wants....

grabs u by the throat....

and lifts u higher....

to where it wants.....

when it wants.....

to disrupt your normality...

and just as quickly hammers u to the gorund....

to leave u dazed in a tornado of unexplained sensations....

which will never be forgotten....


swetie?
of course its just my opinion....
but im a bit uncomfortable w/ you quantifying normality

grin
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May 5, 2008 8:34 AM CST Love is...
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
besides i dont crave love i crave stovies
and i spent 2 hrs in a bathtub during tornado last week

a 15 yr old and a daschsund on top o me


help
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May 5, 2008 8:37 AM CST Love is...
Bowie
BowieBowiewinter haven, Florida USA2 Threads 958 Posts
I love reading your poetry, but it always leaves me wanting.
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May 5, 2008 8:37 AM CST Love is...
kurzita
kurzitakurzitaXaghra, Gozo Malta9 Threads 1,019 Posts
mindfful: swetie?
of course its just my opinion....
but im a bit uncomfortable w/ you quantifying normality


Normality......

a matter of perception...

dunno
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May 5, 2008 8:49 AM CST Love is...
fireliter
fireliterfireliterAllen Park, Michigan USA502 Threads 14 Polls 5,902 Posts
having the sensations of wanting to love, being loved,yes even missing loved one,or becoming melancholy from time to time of a love lost is...... NORMAL

this is my perception of normal.
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May 5, 2008 9:33 AM CST Love is...
Ambrose2007
Ambrose2007Ambrose2007BFE, South Dakota USA67 Threads 10 Polls 8,881 Posts
bajanblue: Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.


Hmmmmmm....some spiral, Bajan, some spiral....dunno wave laugh heart wings
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May 5, 2008 10:03 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
mindfful: besides i dont crave love i crave stovies
and i spent 2 hrs in a bathtub during tornado last week

a 15 yr old and a daschsund on top o me


Once upon a time there was a tornado full of love very puzzled by the fact that no matter how hard he tried, no one would accept the love he offered. He twisted and turned hither thither and yon, trying to share the love to no avail. Finally his life just spiralled out of control and he joined a dating site.

He met a dust devil and they lived happily ever after.

The end.
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May 5, 2008 10:29 AM CST Love is...
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
bajanblue: Once upon a time there was a tornado full of love very puzzled by the fact that no matter how hard he tried, no one would accept the love he offered. He twisted and turned hither thither and yon, trying to share the love to no avail. Finally his life just spiralled out of control and he joined a dating site.

He met a dust devil and they lived happily ever after.

The end.


oh no you didnt!rolling on the floor laughing

youre killin me
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing

crp i gotta sign out
for real

but fire
sooo serious today *teehee*
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May 5, 2008 10:42 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Ambrose2007: Hmmmmmm....some spiral, Bajan, some spiral....


And the music goes round and round...wave hug
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May 5, 2008 10:43 AM CST Love is...
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
mindfful: oh no you didnt!



of course I did!rolling on the floor laughing laugh rolling on the floor laughing
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May 5, 2008 10:45 AM CST Love is...
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
bajanblue: Love is just a spiral of sensation
starting in a thought,
blinking through bedazzled eyes
breathing past lips
choking on a name
locked in the throat,
pausing in the lungs,
beating pounding throbbing
in the heart, the blood, the
shaky knees that take
a timid step
toward reality,
the warmth, the hope, the beauty of it
then retreat
back to the dream where
love is just a spiral of sensation.



thumbs up wave bouquet
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