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May 12, 2008 12:42 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
If i were with you at this moment
i would hold your hand
i would love to dance my last dance with you
i would love to give my last kiss to you
and give you my last breath

i would love to walk into your shoes for a day
and tell you how much i admire you
and if it was possible to sing a song eternally
i would sing it for you

if i were with you for a life time
i would give my life to you
and my whole heart to
to love you it's not a crime

it's a beautiful rose
who look for the sun
like me who look for your love

I feel you in my heart
i feel your touch on my shoulder
these thing i will always remember
that your my sweet lover

if i were with you
it wouldn't be so painfull
if i were with you
i would live day by day

with a smile on my face
because i would see your smile
i would take your hand
and hold it on my heart

if only i were with you
only a second
in your arms
if only i were with you


Just made that poem kidda nice



teddybear
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May 12, 2008 12:42 PM CST if only
kissmedeeply
kissmedeeplykissmedeeplyPetitcodiac, New Brunswick Canada70 Threads 15,139 Posts
valleygirl: If i were with you at this moment
i would hold your hand
i would love to dance my last dance with you
i would love to give my last kiss to you
and give you my last breath

i would love to walk into your shoes for a day
and tell you how much i admire you
and if it was possible to sing a song eternally
i would sing it for you

if i were with you for a life time
i would give my life to you
and my whole heart to
to love you it's not a crime

it's a beautiful rose
who look for the sun
like me who look for your love

I feel you in my heart
i feel your touch on my shoulder
these thing i will always remember
that your my sweet lover

if i were with you
it wouldn't be so painfull
if i were with you
i would live day by day

with a smile on my face
because i would see your smile
i would take your hand
and hold it on my heart

if only i were with you
only a second
in your arms
if only i were with youJust made that poem kidda nice

Very nice Sweetiethumbs up hug
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May 12, 2008 1:02 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
i made it with someone special in my thoughts.
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May 12, 2008 1:32 PM CST if only
kissmedeeply
kissmedeeplykissmedeeplyPetitcodiac, New Brunswick Canada70 Threads 15,139 Posts
valleygirl: i made it with someone special in my thoughts.
any man will be lucky to have youhug
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May 12, 2008 1:50 PM CST if only
arja_ma
arja_maarja_maRiga, Latvia6 Threads 68 Posts
Beautiful... thank you for sharing this poem :)
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May 12, 2008 2:42 PM CST if only
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
That is really nice, true love
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May 12, 2008 3:07 PM CST if only
pvictoria
pvictoriapvictoriaVictoria, Gozo Malta17 Threads 1,044 Posts
valleygirl: If i were with you at this moment
i would hold your hand
i would love to dance my last dance with you
i would love to give my last kiss to you
and give you my last breath

i would love to walk into your shoes for a day
and tell you how much i admire you
and if it was possible to sing a song eternally
i would sing it for you

if i were with you for a life time
i would give my life to you
and my whole heart to
to love you it's not a crime

it's a beautiful rose
who look for the sun
like me who look for your love

I feel you in my heart
i feel your touch on my shoulder
these thing i will always remember
that your my sweet lover

if i were with you
it wouldn't be so painfull
if i were with you
i would live day by day

with a smile on my face
because i would see your smile
i would take your hand
and hold it on my heart

if only i were with you
only a second
in your arms
if only i were with youJust made that poem kidda nice



Very nice Marie thumbs up
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May 12, 2008 4:48 PM CST if only
StressFree
StressFreeStressFreesmall city, Kalmar Sweden176 Threads 16 Polls 8,986 Posts
Lovely poem Marie that I think everybody can identify with...
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May 12, 2008 9:24 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
Thank you evryone



teddybear
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May 12, 2008 9:26 PM CST if only
KrazieStill
KrazieStillKrazieStillChardon, Ohio USA13 Threads 3,978 Posts
That is so nice. Yes, a very lucky man indeed. thumbs up
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May 12, 2008 9:42 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
KrazieStill: That is so nice. Yes, a very lucky man indeed.


thank you Kraz
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May 12, 2008 10:31 PM CST if only
iXofTO
iXofTOiXofTOSan Diego, California USA1 Threads 30 Posts
valleygirl: i made it with someone special in my thoughts.


You need to tell him. Do not spend your life regretting what you haven't done. Read this verse to him, after setting the right mood, and await his response. The fear of rejection does not change the outcome of his feelings for you or not.
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May 12, 2008 10:34 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
iXofTO: You need to tell him. Do not spend your life regretting what you haven't done. Read this verse to him, after setting the right mood, and await his response. The fear of rejection does not change the outcome of his feelings for you or not.


unfortunately i can't
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May 12, 2008 10:38 PM CST if only
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
That would be a dream come true if a woman had those feelings for me, I would feel like a million.
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May 12, 2008 10:40 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
mastic55: That would be a dream come true if a woman had those feelings for me, I would feel like a million.



oh c'mon here you!

hugshug hug hug teddybear
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May 12, 2008 10:42 PM CST if only
iXofTO
iXofTOiXofTOSan Diego, California USA1 Threads 30 Posts
mastic55: That would be a dream come true if a woman had those feelings for me, I would feel like a million.


This embodies the reason why we should never hold back our true feelings.
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May 12, 2008 10:48 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
iXofTO: This embodies the reason why we should never hold back our true feelings.


what never hold back mean

ok the truth about that i was going somewhere 2 years ago and saw a sign that was written that never hold back i past back the next morning and the sign wasn't there and it was the first and last time i saw that sign
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May 12, 2008 10:50 PM CST if only
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
valleygirl: oh c'mon here you!

hugs
So sweethug
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May 12, 2008 10:52 PM CST if only
iXofTO
iXofTOiXofTOSan Diego, California USA1 Threads 30 Posts
valleygirl: what never hold back mean

ok the truth about that i was going somewhere 2 years ago and saw a sign that was written that never hold back i past back the next morning and the sign wasn't there and it was the first and last time i saw that sign


When you feel something, something that you should do, then make the decision not to do it, you are holding back. When you had these feelings for this special someone, feelings that brought these words from your heart to paper, and you did not express them to him when you had the chance, you held back. Understand?!
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May 12, 2008 10:52 PM CST if only
valleygirl
valleygirlvalleygirlottawa, Canada139 Threads 4 Polls 786 Posts
mastic55: So sweet


it's my pleasure mastic to givehug
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