What sort of letter would you write with your cv? ( Archived) (34)

Aug 13, 2008 5:11 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
I am just applying for another couple of jobs which require a
hand written letter, which poses no problems as my
writing is very legible.

Only concern is knowing whether
to phrase said letters in the usual staid fashion, or to
try and be a bit adventurous with the wording.

Any suggestions gratefully considered.



help peace devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:14 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
Hi Siren

This is a covering letter right?

This needs to be short and to the point.

Sharp, sassy and needs to grab an eye.

I employ people and that is what I look for.

Introduction about why you are writing, then a couple of sentence of why you are what they are looking for.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:19 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
vonney
vonneyvonneyDublin, Ireland24 Threads 6,371 Posts
Shouldnt be to long and should be about why you are the person for the job.


No need to put any employment history on it, your cv should cover that.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:19 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Sommerauer71: Hi Siren

This is a covering letter right?

This needs to be short and to the point.

Sharp, sassy and needs to grab an eye.

I employ people and that is what I look for.

Introduction about why you are writing, then a couple of sentence of why you are what they are looking for.


Hi Sommer, thanks,

Would you look at a cv covering three pages?
I have been around awhile......yay
Or should I cut it back to the last ten years?

We used to employ years ago and I would
read everything, but things change so much
and so many people are after the same
jobs these days.

peace devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:20 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
sxc666
sxc666sxc666unknown, Queensland Australia51 Threads 16,853 Posts
I would write.

here I am baby, signed,sealed and delivered. Im yours buddies
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Aug 13, 2008 5:21 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
vonney: Shouldnt be to long and should be about why you are the person for the job.No need to put any employment history on it, your cv should cover that.


Thanks Vonney.......wave devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:21 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
vonney
vonneyvonneyDublin, Ireland24 Threads 6,371 Posts
SirenLydia: Hi Sommer, thanks,

Would you look at a cv covering three pages?
I have been around awhile......
Or should I cut it back to the last ten years?

We used to employ years ago and I would
read everything, but things change so much
and so many people are after the same
jobs these days.





I would cut down CV, 3 pages to my mind is to much.

Do you have bullet points at top of your CV with your key skills listed?
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Aug 13, 2008 5:22 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
sxc666: I would write.

here I am baby, signed,sealed and delivered. Im yours



I love it, but not sure it's the thing for an accounts position!laugh


devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:22 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
sxc666: I would write.

here I am baby, signed,sealed and delivered. Im yours


Now that would be an award winning resume...head banger
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Aug 13, 2008 5:25 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
vonney: I would cut down CV, 3 pages to my mind is to much.

Do you have bullet points at top of your CV with your key skills listed?


No I'm not a lover of bullet points, I tend to list my
skills with each job I have done.

But maybe I should try bullets at top and cut
back on each job description.

bouquet devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:26 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
SirenLydia: Hi Sommer, thanks,

Would you look at a cv covering three pages?
I have been around awhile......
Or should I cut it back to the last ten years?

We used to employ years ago and I would
read everything, but things change so much
and so many people are after the same
jobs these days.


It depends, on the age of a person.

I would not entertain a CV of three pages from a 21 one year old.

Depends on how long the description of each job was, obviously your recent five years would be what any prospective employer would be interested in and that your objective is interesting.

A CV, whilst it should be informative, should not have more than a few sentences of a job that you did when you were 20, also depends on what sort of position you are applying for, a strong salesperson will list their targets and hopefully prove their track record, it is hard without knowing what you are applying for.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:27 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
SirenLydia: I love it, but not sure it's the thing for an accounts position!


Ah now I know.

Is this for a qualified accounts position?
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Aug 13, 2008 5:28 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
vonney
vonneyvonneyDublin, Ireland24 Threads 6,371 Posts
SirenLydia: No I'm not a lover of bullet points, I tend to list my
skills with each job I have done.

But maybe I should try bullets at top and cut
back on each job description.



I may be out of the loop on this but I worked as an Employment Liasion Officer for 4 years, during that time I would have recommended that a CV should have key skills listed at the top and employment history simply state dates of employment and job title, if you have room a brief discription of duties.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:31 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Enduro
EnduroEnduroLaunceston, Tasmania Australia14 Threads 284 Posts
Sommerauer71: Hi Siren

This is a covering letter right?

This needs to be short and to the point.

Sharp, sassy and needs to grab an eye.

I employ people and that is what I look for.

Introduction about why you are writing, then a couple of sentence of why you are what they are looking for.



Great advice from sommer and also be sure to express your keen interest and make your letter like yourself interesting.

But absolutely critical is for neat handwriting and correct spelling is so very important.
Remember you need to stand out from the crowd.

Just think of it like a headline and that you need to catch their attention very quickly. In advertising it is well known that the headline is the key and when writing advertising it is wise to spend 95% of time to just decide the headline as you only have a few seconds to win them over and get them to read more.

Hope that helps and good luck. thumbs up
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Aug 13, 2008 5:32 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Sommerauer71: Ah now I know.

Is this for a qualified accounts position?


Qualified as in experienced up to trial balance double
entry bookeeping when we ran a business years ago.
Just got made redundant from a sales ledger job I
really enjoyed.

devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:36 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Enduro: Great advice from sommer and also be sure to express your keen interest and make your letter like yourself interesting.

But absolutely critical is for neat handwriting and correct spelling is so very important.
Remember you need to stand out from the crowd.

Just think of it like a headline and that you need to catch their attention very quickly. In advertising it is well known that the headline is the key and when writing advertising it is wise to spend 95% of time to just decide the headline as you only have a few seconds to win them over and get them to read more.

Hope that helps and good luck.


Thank you very much for replying,

that's the difficulty these days you have to grab them
in writing!

yes it all helps



wave devil
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Aug 13, 2008 5:45 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
SirenLydia: Qualified as in experienced up to trial balance double
entry bookeeping when we ran a business years ago.
Just got made redundant from a sales ledger job I
really enjoyed.



I am sorry.

Are they asking for double entry book keeping?

I would bullet point each responsibility from previous jobs, I like bullet points, with a brief description prior to the bullet points about the company.

Your covering letter, I would suggest that you write that from your CV, they will see that your skills will suit their requirements.

One that I received from a woman, who I thought was wonderful, just straight to the point.

'Dear Madam

I am writing to introduce myself, also enclosing my CV for your consideration for the post advertised (insert, position, date of publication and which publication)

As you will see from my CV, I have the relevant skills that you require.

If there are any areas that you need clarification on, or I can answer any questions, then I may be contacted on ......

I look forward to hearing from you soon.'

In a covering letter you do not need to repeat what is in your CV, I hired this woman as I liked her straight forward approach.


It was short sharp, to the point and I wanted her immediately.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:47 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
sxc666
sxc666sxc666unknown, Queensland Australia51 Threads 16,853 Posts
SirenLydia: I love it, but not sure it's the thing for an accounts position!
giggle yeah whatever you do dont listen uh oh
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Aug 13, 2008 5:49 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
EnSilencio
EnSilencioEnSilencioAlmunecar, Andalusia Spain13 Threads 2 Polls 1,118 Posts
I have a short CV where all my experience and gained qualities are listed in a compact format

I enclose a brief cover letter, (That's a single page face side only), making clear what post I apply for and why I could be of use for the company in that position - with reference to the former position I've held supporting my statement.

In the foot note of the cover letter I ask them to require the full CV with details if they find me suitable for further interview.

My CV (Stage 1) is three pages.

1. Cover letter
2. Qualities and Experience
3. Education, References and Relations

No more.

It is very effective and saves the day for the HR department.

My full CV is 12 pages...
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Aug 13, 2008 5:50 AM CST What sort of letter would you write with your cv?
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Sommerauer71: I am sorry.

Are they asking for double entry book keeping?

I would bullet point each responsibility from previous jobs, I like bullet points, with a brief description prior to the bullet points about the company.

Your covering letter, I would suggest that you write that from your CV, they will see that your skills will suit their requirements.

One that I received from a woman, who I thought was wonderful, just straight to the point.

'Dear Madam

I am writing to introduce myself, also enclosing my CV for your consideration for the post advertised (insert, position, date of publication and which publication)

As you will see from my CV, I have the relevant skills that you require.

If there are any areas that you need clarification on, or I can answer any questions, then I may be contacted on ......

I look forward to hearing from you soon.'

In a covering letter you do not need to repeat what is in your CV, I hired this woman as I liked her straight forward approach. It was short sharp, to the point and I wanted her immediately.


Yes thanks that's an excellent letter,
I have got as far as:-

'Dear Madam

I am writing to introduce myself, also enclosing my CV for your consideration for the post advertised (insert, position, date of publication and which publication)

As you will see from my CV, I have the relevant skills that you require.

If there are any areas that you need clarification on, or I can answer any questions, then I may be contacted on ......

Thank you, I like that very much,
I have got as far as:-

Dear Sir/Madam,

Ref: Application for Accounts Assistant

I would welcome an interview to discuss your requirements for the above job and my suitability for the position. Also to show you the glowing reference from my last
Employer who had to make me redundant.

I enclose my c.v. for your consideration and look forward to (hopefully) hearing from you.



peace devil
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