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Aug 21, 2008 9:21 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA39 Threads 3 Polls 2,180 Posts
Once I thought I saw the light
I still recall the joy.
Once I breathed in deep
and felt the love I thought was real.
Once I held you close,
I felt so strong inside.
Once was truth.
now is severerd by deception.
Once a promise and a sharper future.
the only sharp, just pierces deep into the wound.
unlike the rose forever young,
I'm shelved and left to dust and void.
Once is here, and Once is fair.
but now it's who gets their fair share.
In a world so large I seem exposed
Like dying fish on shores in soot.
though truth shines bright,
it's still enveloped by the smiles
the words that dig the deeper cut
the words that bleed my very soul.
though music soothed my soul for times
the damage still is deep inside.
I'm not alone, I look around.
I hold the hand of sadder lands.
In a world so small to see
the love that disapeared from thee.

Bettis
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Aug 21, 2008 9:24 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
keytone: Once I thought I saw the light
I still recall the joy.
Once I breathed in deep
and felt the love I thought was real.
Once I held you close,
I felt so strong inside.
Once was truth.
now is severerd by deception.
Once a promise and a sharper future.
the only sharp, just pierces deep into the wound.
unlike the rose forever young,
I'm shelved and left to dust and void.
Once is here, and Once is fair.
but now it's who gets their fair share.
In a world so large I seem exposed
Like dying fish on shores in soot.
though truth shines bright,
it's still enveloped by the smiles
the words that dig the deeper cut
the words that bleed my very soul.
though music soothed my soul for times
the damage still is deep inside.
I'm not alone, I look around.
I hold the hand of sadder lands.
In a world so small to see
the love that disapeared from thee.

Bettis



Beautiful but sad too.
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Aug 21, 2008 9:26 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
simpleone
simpleonesimpleoneArkansas, USA3 Threads 74 Posts
keytone: Once I thought I saw the light
I still recall the joy.
Once I breathed in deep
and felt the love I thought was real.
Once I held you close,
I felt so strong inside.
Once was truth.
now is severerd by deception.
Once a promise and a sharper future.
the only sharp, just pierces deep into the wound.
unlike the rose forever young,
I'm shelved and left to dust and void.
Once is here, and Once is fair.
but now it's who gets their fair share.
In a world so large I seem exposed
Like dying fish on shores in soot.
though truth shines bright,
it's still enveloped by the smiles
the words that dig the deeper cut
the words that bleed my very soul.
though music soothed my soul for times
the damage still is deep inside.
I'm not alone, I look around.
I hold the hand of sadder lands.
In a world so small to see
the love that disapeared from thee.

Bettis




I loved this one
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Aug 21, 2008 9:29 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
mbcasey
mbcaseymbcaseyNorth Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA78 Threads 7 Polls 21,350 Posts
That is very well done Bettis.
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Aug 21, 2008 9:35 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
hmmm



Bettis...

I'm totally picking up the emotional vibe of this...




... sadly realistic broken heart







Thanks for sharing it.








tip hat
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Aug 21, 2008 10:00 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA298 Threads 31,072 Posts
Very beautiful Bettis, and lots of passion in your wordswine hug sad flower
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Aug 22, 2008 2:33 PM CST "once" {a plead of nothing}
BamaFan
BamaFanBamaFanbirmingham, Alabama USA27 Threads 116 Posts
Beautiful!!
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