I Am Just A Voice ( Archived) (21)

Sep 2, 2008 4:46 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
As I walk these lonely streets
though there's people around me
There's no one with which to share
I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely

Over there, two young lovers
holding hands and walking
laughing and smiling
it's the sound of love talking

Yet another couple
into eachother's eyes they stare
even though the streets are crowded
they only see eachother there

This feeling of sadness
it creeps into my soul
because on my path
it's alone I must go

I am just a voice
quivering I speak
if I look you way
will you turn away from me

With all my strength
I try to hide the way I feel
but my loney heart
isn't really made of steel

I won't let you see me cry
I will just go on alone
you will know where to find me
on the lonely streets I roam

By Daniel
08/02/08
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Sep 2, 2008 4:48 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
Daniel

You are not 'just' a voice.

You are your voice and you.

hug
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Sep 2, 2008 4:49 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Sommerauer71: Daniel

You are not 'just' a voice.

You are your voice and you.


Thank you Sommer...hug
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Sep 2, 2008 4:50 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
I'm just plain lost for words.
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Sep 2, 2008 4:53 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
somechick: I'm just plain lost for words.


How so? But thank you just the same..hug
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Sep 2, 2008 4:56 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021: How so? But thank you just the same..



It's not the kind of poem I've seen you write.
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Sep 2, 2008 4:58 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
somechick: It's not the kind of poem I've seen you write.


I have written similar poems before..
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Sep 2, 2008 4:59 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021: I have written similar poems before..



It just sounds so darn sad and makes me want to cry.
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Sep 2, 2008 5:01 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
somechick: It just sounds so darn sad and makes me want to cry.


Here is a link to another one I wrote sometime back..

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Sep 2, 2008 5:07 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021: Here is a link to another one I wrote sometime back..





I couldn't read anymore of it.
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Sep 2, 2008 5:08 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
somechick: I couldn't read anymore of it.


didn't mean to make you sad..
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Sep 2, 2008 5:10 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021: didn't mean to make you sad..



I've been awake most of the night thinking and crying .
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Sep 2, 2008 5:16 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
somechick: I've been awake most of the night thinking and crying .


What's the matter, why are you sad?
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Sep 2, 2008 5:16 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
BarrenPneuma
BarrenPneumaBarrenPneumaGolden Staircase, Ontario Canada87 Threads 3 Polls 1,561 Posts
The sorrow which has no vent in tears may make other organs weep. ~Henry Maudsley
Let your tears come. Let them water your soul. ~Eileen Mayhew
Heaven knows we need never be ashamed of our tears, for they are rain upon the blinding dust of earth, overlying our hard hearts. ~Charles Dickens, Great Expectations, 1860
The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears. ~John Vance Cheney
Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. ~Christian Nevell Bovee
Time engraves our faces with all the tears we have not shed. ~Natalie Clifford Barney
Heavy hearts, like heavy clouds in the sky, are best relieved by the letting of a little water. ~Antoine Rivarol
It is some relief to weep; grief is satisfied and carried off by tears. ~Ovid
Those who do not know how to weep with their whole heart don't know how to laugh either. ~Golda Meir
Tears are Summer showers to the soul. ~Alfred Austin, Savonarola
What soap is for the body, tears are for the soul. ~Jewish Proverb

hug
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Sep 2, 2008 5:18 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
BarrenPneuma: The sorrow which has no vent in tears may make other organs weep. ~Henry Maudsley
Let your tears come. Let them water your soul. ~Eileen Mayhew
Heaven knows we need never be ashamed of our tears, for they are rain upon the blinding dust of earth, overlying our hard hearts. ~Charles Dickens, Great Expectations, 1860
The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears. ~John Vance Cheney
Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. ~Christian Nevell Bovee
Time engraves our faces with all the tears we have not shed. ~Natalie Clifford Barney
Heavy hearts, like heavy clouds in the sky, are best relieved by the letting of a little water. ~Antoine Rivarol
It is some relief to weep; grief is satisfied and carried off by tears. ~Ovid
Those who do not know how to weep with their whole heart don't know how to laugh either. ~Golda Meir
Tears are Summer showers to the soul. ~Alfred Austin, Savonarola
What soap is for the body, tears are for the soul. ~Jewish Proverb


Thank you Barron.. a nice addition to this thread..handshake
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Sep 2, 2008 5:36 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
BarrenPneuma
BarrenPneumaBarrenPneumaGolden Staircase, Ontario Canada87 Threads 3 Polls 1,561 Posts
You are most welcome Daniel.
Not my own words but then again I hold no candle to those which you posted above and would deem them worthless in comparison.

Carry your strength with you and you will never be alone.
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Sep 2, 2008 5:41 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
somechick: I've been awake most of the night thinking and crying .

Hi you.

It is ok to think and cry.

hug
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Sep 2, 2008 8:23 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
Daniel4021: As I walk these lonely streets
though there's people around me
There's no one with which to share
I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely

Over there, two young lovers
holding hands and walking
laughing and smiling
it's the sound of love talking

Yet another couple
into eachother's eyes they stare
even though the streets are crowded
they only see eachother there

This feeling of sadness
it creeps into my soul
because on my path
it's alone I must go

I am just a voice
quivering I speak
if I look you way
will you turn away from me

With all my strength
I try to hide the way I feel
but my loney heart
isn't really made of steel

I won't let you see me cry
I will just go on alone
you will know where to find me
on the lonely streets I roam

By Daniel
08/02/08
thumbs up wave
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Sep 2, 2008 10:51 AM CST I Am Just A Voice
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
Daniel4021: As I walk these lonely streets
though there's people around me
There's no one with which to share
I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely

Over there, two young lovers
holding hands and walking
laughing and smiling
it's the sound of love talking

Yet another couple
into eachother's eyes they stare
even though the streets are crowded
they only see eachother there

This feeling of sadness
it creeps into my soul
because on my path
it's alone I must go

I am just a voice
quivering I speak
if I look you way
will you turn away from me

With all my strength
I try to hide the way I feel
but my loney heart
isn't really made of steel

I won't let you see me cry
I will just go on alone
you will know where to find me
on the lonely streets I roam

By Daniel
08/02/08


That's one I relate to many times...I felt this ways both here and over there. Good work Daniel.
thumbs up
;-}
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