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Sep 5, 2008 9:45 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
wonderwoman1
wonderwoman1wonderwoman1ottawa, Ontario Canada55 Threads 2 Polls 241 Posts
i am looking for nice poems so i can put music on

if you want to give me the copy rights i will make a video with your song(poems) and will put music and sing it

dan you have wonderful poems but i have to got your permission to use it if you want let me know

and i would like to have the permission to put it on my website dan, zdeadman, and everyone who want let me know?


sincerely

Marieteddybear
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Sep 5, 2008 9:51 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
wonderwoman1: i am looking for nice poems so i can put music on

if you want to give me the copy rights i will make a video with your song(poems) and will put music and sing it

dan you have wonderful poems but i have to got your permission to use it if you want let me know

and i would like to have the permission to put it on my website dan, zdeadman, and everyone who want let me know?sincerely

Marie
zdeadman got banned after his takeover craplaugh laugh laugh
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Sep 5, 2008 9:56 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
I'm bleeding my heart out and your talking poems. This is what I mean,doh
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Sep 5, 2008 9:58 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
And I sick of people were I live, they are nasty, always say something rude,,the next one in person I'm going to knock out,,l,get the bail ready,,deep inside it will relieve me....
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Sep 5, 2008 9:59 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
mastic55: I'm bleeding my heart out and your talking poems. This is what I mean,
Aaaaaah hang in there mastic , come on , let others have their fun!!hug hug
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Sep 5, 2008 10:00 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
didnt mean to be rude.....sorry.....
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Sep 5, 2008 10:00 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
wonderwoman1
wonderwoman1wonderwoman1ottawa, Ontario Canada55 Threads 2 Polls 241 Posts
mylifewithu: zdeadman got banned after his takeover crap


ok didn't know that but he had nice poems
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Sep 5, 2008 10:01 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
mastic55: And I sick of people were I live, they are nasty, always say something rude,,the next one in person I'm going to knock out,,l,get the bail ready,,deep inside it will relieve me....
Sorry hun but to me I would say where you live is like Duh doh you are going to get that attitude up there. I have traveled a lot while growing up I seen a lot rudeness in the states in your area. hug hug
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Sep 5, 2008 10:03 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
wonderwoman1: ok didn't know that but he had nice poems
Yes he had good stuff , but he got moody and did a takeover attempt and he asked for it. I don't know why? But he spent the whole evening posted this is a takeover attempt on every thread and every old thread. It was cool and funny but bad.laugh laugh thumbs up
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Sep 5, 2008 10:07 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
wonderwoman1
wonderwoman1wonderwoman1ottawa, Ontario Canada55 Threads 2 Polls 241 Posts
Dan can i take this on please and make a little of change in it please please

(1)
As I walk these lonely streets
though there's people around me
There's no one with which to share
I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely

Over there, two young lovers
holding hands and walking
laughing and smiling
it's the sound of love talking
(2)
Yet another couple
into eachother's eyes they stare
even though the streets are crowded
they only see eachother there

This feeling of sadness
it creeps into my soul
because on my path
it's alone I must go

(chorus)
I am just a voice
quivering I speak
if I look you way
will you turn away from me

With all my strength
I try to hide the way I feel
but my loney heart
isn't really made of steel

(3)
I won't let you see me cry
I will just go on alone
you will know where to find me
on the lonely streets I roam

By Daniel
08/02/08
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Sep 5, 2008 11:05 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
wonderwoman1
wonderwoman1wonderwoman1ottawa, Ontario Canada55 Threads 2 Polls 241 Posts
wonderwoman1: Dan can i take this on please and make a little of change in it please please

(1)
As I walk these lonely streets
though there's people around me
There's no one with which to share
I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely

Over there, two young lovers
holding hands and walking
laughing and smiling
it's the sound of love talking
(2)
Yet another couple
into eachother's eyes they stare
even though the streets are crowded
they only see eachother there

This feeling of sadness
it creeps into my soul
because on my path
it's alone I must go

(chorus)
I am just a voice
quivering I speak
if I look you way
will you turn away from me

With all my strength
I try to hide the way I feel
but my loney heart
isn't really made of steel

(3)
I won't let you see me cry
I will just go on alone
you will know where to find me
on the lonely streets I roam

By Daniel
08/02/08



Daniel this poem is awesome with walts beat and studio piano wow
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Sep 5, 2008 11:08 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
I'm a terrible poet,but I'LL try anyways.

Roses are red,
Violets are green,
YOU got hairy legs,
AND NOTHING IN BETWEEN.



You're welcome.
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Sep 5, 2008 11:14 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
So..................am I NOMINATED?
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Sep 5, 2008 11:16 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
Ocee35
Ocee35Ocee35Jackson, Michigan USA69 Threads 2 Polls 3,852 Posts
thewall2: I'm a terrible poet,but I'LL try anyways.

Roses are red,
Violets are green,
YOU got hairy legs,
AND NOTHING IN BETWEEN.
You're welcome.



Who is Chewbacca?

I'll take Star Wars references and celibacy for $1,000

Alex.
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Sep 5, 2008 11:17 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
thewall2: I'm a terrible poet,but I'LL try anyways.

Roses are red,
Violets are green,
YOU got hairy legs,
AND NOTHING IN BETWEEN.
You're welcome.
doh rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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Sep 5, 2008 11:19 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
Ocee35: Who is Chewbacca?

I'll take Star Wars references and celibacy for $1,000

Alex.



Slime monster from STAR WARS parady SPACEBALLS?
















Answer.....Pizza THE HUT.













pizza
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Sep 5, 2008 11:26 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
wonderwoman1
wonderwoman1wonderwoman1ottawa, Ontario Canada55 Threads 2 Polls 241 Posts
thewall2: I'm a terrible poet,but I'LL try anyways.

Roses are red,
Violets are green,
YOU got hairy legs,
AND NOTHING IN BETWEEN.
You're welcome.



no sorry i need at least 3 min song....lol
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Sep 5, 2008 11:33 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
Don't use Daniel's stuff unless he says otherwise, cause he writes good stuff but he may not want it done like this, thats all up to him. Just stating I hope you wait for his permission!wine
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Sep 5, 2008 11:35 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
thewall2
thewall2thewall2montreal, Quebec Canada61 Threads 10,499 Posts
wonderwoman1: no sorry i need at least 3 min song....lol



When the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie.......that's AMORE!


Roses are RED......
Violets are GREEN.....
YOU got hairy legs.......
And Nothing in between.......



THAT'S AMOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!






I WANT ROYALTIES IF you publish this song.
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Sep 5, 2008 11:45 PM CST guy's,daniel,zdeadmanwalking,anyone
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
thewall2: When the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie.......that's AMORE!Roses are RED......
Violets are GREEN.....
YOU got hairy legs.......
And Nothing in between.......
THAT'S AMOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
I WANT ROYALTIES IF you publish this song.
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