And I sick of people were I live, they are nasty, always say something rude,,the next one in person I'm going to knock out,,l,get the bail ready,,deep inside it will relieve me....
mastic55: And I sick of people were I live, they are nasty, always say something rude,,the next one in person I'm going to knock out,,l,get the bail ready,,deep inside it will relieve me....
Sorry hun but to me I would say where you live is like Duh you are going to get that attitude up there. I have traveled a lot while growing up I seen a lot rudeness in the states in your area.
wonderwoman1: ok didn't know that but he had nice poems
Yes he had good stuff , but he got moody and did a takeover attempt and he asked for it. I don't know why? But he spent the whole evening posted this is a takeover attempt on every thread and every old thread. It was cool and funny but bad.
Dan can i take this on please and make a little of change in it please please
(1) As I walk these lonely streets though there's people around me There's no one with which to share I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely
Over there, two young lovers holding hands and walking laughing and smiling it's the sound of love talking (2) Yet another couple into eachother's eyes they stare even though the streets are crowded they only see eachother there
This feeling of sadness it creeps into my soul because on my path it's alone I must go
(chorus) I am just a voice quivering I speak if I look you way will you turn away from me
With all my strength I try to hide the way I feel but my loney heart isn't really made of steel
(3) I won't let you see me cry I will just go on alone you will know where to find me on the lonely streets I roam
wonderwoman1: Dan can i take this on please and make a little of change in it please please
(1) As I walk these lonely streets though there's people around me There's no one with which to share I can't break this feeling, i'm just so lonely
Over there, two young lovers holding hands and walking laughing and smiling it's the sound of love talking (2) Yet another couple into eachother's eyes they stare even though the streets are crowded they only see eachother there
This feeling of sadness it creeps into my soul because on my path it's alone I must go
(chorus) I am just a voice quivering I speak if I look you way will you turn away from me
With all my strength I try to hide the way I feel but my loney heart isn't really made of steel
(3) I won't let you see me cry I will just go on alone you will know where to find me on the lonely streets I roam
By Daniel 08/02/08
Daniel this poem is awesome with walts beat and studio piano wow
Don't use Daniel's stuff unless he says otherwise, cause he writes good stuff but he may not want it done like this, thats all up to him. Just stating I hope you wait for his permission!
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if you want to give me the copy rights i will make a video with your song(poems) and will put music and sing it
dan you have wonderful poems but i have to got your permission to use it if you want let me know
and i would like to have the permission to put it on my website dan, zdeadman, and everyone who want let me know?
sincerely
Marie