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Oct 19, 2008 1:05 PM CST Saving Grace
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA786 Threads 2 Polls 12,449 Posts
She is my saving grace
The only pure thing
In this rotten place
Her love is a shelter
From the daily storm
Her lips are a fire
Her love keeps me warm.

I'm saved by her eyes
Her heart, her touch
I love you my angel
I love you so much...

I want to hold her
And keep her safe
From predation
I'll save her as well
From her frustration
I'll make long, slow love
Worship her body,
Its not a sin, I think
To think of us naughty.

I'm saved by her eyes
Her heart, her touch
I love you my angel
I love you so much...
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Oct 19, 2008 1:14 PM CST Saving Grace
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA298 Threads 31,072 Posts
Wow another beautiful poem Bodhiwine It's so cool that ever since you found this woman , your poetry has become so sweet, a nice breath of fresh air for this place.wine wink applause
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Oct 19, 2008 1:16 PM CST Saving Grace
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK52 Threads 2 Polls 5,255 Posts
mylifewithu: Wow another beautiful poem Bodhi It's so cool that ever since you found this woman , your poetry has become so sweet, a nice breath of fresh air for this place.


I've been thinking the same thing,

the style and feelings have changed so dramatically.


bouquet devil
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Oct 19, 2008 1:17 PM CST Saving Grace
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA786 Threads 2 Polls 12,449 Posts
mylifewithu: Wow another beautiful poem Bodhi It's so cool that ever since you found this woman , your poetry has become so sweet, a nice breath of fresh air for this place.


Thank you lela. It's always nice to contribute to the stated intentions of this site blushing
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Oct 19, 2008 1:18 PM CST Saving Grace
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA298 Threads 31,072 Posts
SirenLydia: I've been thinking the same thing,

the style and feelings have changed so dramatically.
It creates smiles and good feelings. It's great, when some one elses love can bring good feelings to others.wink applause thumbs up
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Oct 19, 2008 1:19 PM CST Saving Grace
marikin
marikinmarikintokyo, Kanto Japan3 Threads 236 Posts
Galactic_bodhi: She is my saving grace
The only pure thing
In this rotten place
Her love is a shelter
From the daily storm
Her lips are a fire
Her love keeps me warm.

I'm saved by her eyes
Her heart, her touch
I love you my angel
I love you so much...

I want to hold her
And keep her safe
From predation
I'll save her as well
From her frustration
I'll make long, slow love
Worship her body,
Its not a sin, I think
To think of us naughty.

I'm saved by her eyes
Her heart, her touch
I love you my angel
I love you so much...


Cheers wine to a graceful and gifted man !
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Oct 19, 2008 1:20 PM CST Saving Grace
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA298 Threads 31,072 Posts
Galactic_bodhi: Thank you lela. It's always nice to contribute to the stated intentions of this site
You are very welcome Bodhi, Keep it up , this place can always use fresh air.wink laugh thumbs up hug
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Oct 19, 2008 1:33 PM CST Saving Grace
druidess6308
druidess6308druidess6308Aliquippa, Pennsylvania USA99 Threads 20,283 Posts
She's a lucky woman, GB. I hope she realizes it. Beautiful poem.

hug rose
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Oct 19, 2008 1:37 PM CST Saving Grace
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA786 Threads 2 Polls 12,449 Posts
mylifewithu: You are very welcome Bodhi, Keep it up , this place can always use fresh air.


I'm only fresh with her...otherwise I'm just full of the hot variety :blushig: laugh wink
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Oct 19, 2008 2:21 PM CST Saving Grace
ModestlyAwesome
ModestlyAwesomeModestlyAwesomePhoenix, Arizona USA3 Threads 2 Polls 543 Posts
grin thumbs up A poem can be a window into the writers soul, and when reading this I am glad you are happy.
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