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Oct 22, 2008 1:59 AM CST Can't Take My Love
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA786 Threads 2 Polls 12,449 Posts
One verse before I sleep
How much I love you,
and how deep.
Many dreams make life real
Many hearts that love,
Many hands that feel,
But when we find our dream awake
We truly know what is at stake.
It's like we're waiting to be born
From a dream into love we're torn,
And shake and shiver, will God deliver
Or will he, as his wont, give, then take
I don't care, this is not a mistake,
For should he give just one moment with you
I'd live my life and never feel blue,
He can take you away from me,
But he cant take my love you see.
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Oct 22, 2008 2:06 AM CST Can't Take My Love
Hugz_n_Kissez
Hugz_n_KissezHugz_n_KissezSomeplace, Ontario Canada82 Threads 3 Polls 34,865 Posts
Galactic_bodhi: One verse before I sleep
How much I love you,
and how deep.
Many dreams make life real
Many hearts that love,
Many hands that feel,
But when we find our dream awake
We truly know what is at stake.
It's like we're waiting to be born
From a dream into love we're torn,
And shake and shiver, will God deliver
Or will he, as his wont, give, then take
I don't care, this is not a mistake,
For should he give just one moment with you
I'd live my life and never feel blue,
He can take you away from me,
But he cant take my love you see.




AWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEE...That's beautiful....wave wink hug teddybear hug bouquet
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Oct 22, 2008 2:07 AM CST Can't Take My Love
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA298 Threads 31,072 Posts
Another beautiful poem Bodhi, thanks for sharing with usapplause applause wine hug
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Oct 22, 2008 2:07 AM CST Can't Take My Love
StarliteFantazy
StarliteFantazyStarliteFantazyFantazyLand, Missouri USA37 Threads 3 Polls 4,307 Posts
thumbs up very well done GB
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