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Nov 4, 2008 9:09 AM CST Ode to one
PietroPaoloV
PietroPaoloVPietroPaoloVGöteborg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden113 Threads 5 Polls 1,509 Posts
Full comfort beside me, you are, sleeping still under the arriving dawn, when a warm breath of mine moves that soft hair fallen over your eyes to the side, removed and left resting on your cheek it flees.

That sigh of joy which I have exhaled, it wakes you, where the first image you see, is me. You look at me, looking at you, with a smile.
How else could one view thee?
And how else could thy reply be, but to greet me with a smile in return, a slight hint of a blush to add.

Good fortune written in those eyes of yours, upon which my own eyes are resting, into which I am almost as lost as Jason and his Argonauts once almost were lost on their ancient adventure. But good fortune here is, because I am not lost, I’m found, by you, and I know what need be a next in this touch between two souls destiny made cross paths, and good fortune in your eyes, because you know what awaits.

Lips leaned onto yours, a hymn to be remembered as the first song I sang thee, and nothing will be as before. Yet it will be as you remembered how it once was, when that well known magical breeze passed your heart, the one made it sing, a heavenly choir would declare envy.

Then, an embrace, a strong, mighty closeness around your person, a whispered lust into your ear, and then….

And then….

It is an ode, to one, because it is what highwaymen do.
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Nov 4, 2008 9:35 AM CST Ode to one
PietroPaoloV
PietroPaoloVPietroPaoloVGöteborg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden113 Threads 5 Polls 1,509 Posts
What I like with Salzburg, a fine city in which I have never before been, is that they have easily accessible balconies, they are easy to climb up to, to do odes.
That, and the fathers of the daughters fall asleep early.
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Nov 4, 2008 9:36 AM CST Ode to one
Kevint
KevintKevintWorcester, Home of the sauce, West Midlands, England UK13 Threads 727 Posts
Pietro, you write with such passion, such understanding of the female, this ode tells so much of your desire to be with the one person who has touched you in such a special way, to have that desire reciprocated is a dream many, nay all, are searching for within this world. You are without doubt a very lucky Highwayman, I am proud and happy to ride alongside you hoping that some of your speciality will rub off onto me.
I will hold you to that drink and it will be my joy to pay for the first of many rounds.laugh
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Nov 4, 2008 9:37 AM CST Ode to one
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria164 Threads 4 Polls 19,249 Posts
PietroPaoloV: What I like with Salzburg, a fine city in which I have never before been, is that they have easily accessible balconies, they are easy to climb up to, to do odes.
That, and the fathers of the daughters fall asleep early.
rolling on the floor laughing


He has fallen asleep, he is struggling with five camels...
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Nov 4, 2008 9:39 AM CST Ode to one
PietroPaoloV
PietroPaoloVPietroPaoloVGöteborg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden113 Threads 5 Polls 1,509 Posts
Sir, you are my sword to me right, Barren covers my other flank.
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Nov 4, 2008 9:39 AM CST Ode to one
Kevint
KevintKevintWorcester, Home of the sauce, West Midlands, England UK13 Threads 727 Posts
Sommerauer71: He has fallen asleep, he is struggling with five camels...


A camel a camel, my kingdom for a camel

rolling on the floor laughing
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Nov 4, 2008 9:43 AM CST Ode to one
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria164 Threads 4 Polls 19,249 Posts
Kevint: A camel a camel, my kingdom for a camel



Hey, I come with little, two teenage kids, 101 borrowed other ones, a smile and a soul that has just been entered.

I enter his kingdom with pleasure...

As for my father, he is confused he has no idea what to do with the camels.
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Nov 4, 2008 9:48 AM CST Ode to one
PietroPaoloV
PietroPaoloVPietroPaoloVGöteborg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden113 Threads 5 Polls 1,509 Posts
You do with camels what men with camels do, you pass them on as trade for something better, as a fine daughter of Salzburg, for instance.

Your father could find a second wife, for these five.

A creature who can pass a desert on a hump and funny running legs is not to mock out of value, really.
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Nov 4, 2008 9:48 AM CST Ode to one
Kevint
KevintKevintWorcester, Home of the sauce, West Midlands, England UK13 Threads 727 Posts
Sommerauer71: Hey, I come with little, two teenage kids, 101 borrowed other ones, a smile and a soul that has just been entered.

I enter his kingdom with pleasure...

As for my father, he is he has no idea what to do with the camels.


A thought comes to mind, it concerns the hump, but it passes as I see the twinkle in your eye.
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Nov 4, 2008 10:11 AM CST Ode to one
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria164 Threads 4 Polls 19,249 Posts
PietroPaoloV: You do with camels what men with camels do, you pass them on as trade for something better, as a fine daughter of Salzburg, for instance.

Your father could find a second wife, for these five.

A creature who can pass a desert on a hump and funny running legs is not to mock out of value, really.



Oh I know, but there are no deserts in the UK, unless you call Blackpool Beach one...

He could yes, I am sure his current wife needs a break...

Camels eh? I knew there was a reason for such fine animals...

You sure got my father baffled and you sure made me blush...

You can get off your horse now...
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Nov 4, 2008 10:19 AM CST Ode to one
PietroPaoloV
PietroPaoloVPietroPaoloVGöteborg, Vastra Gotaland Sweden113 Threads 5 Polls 1,509 Posts
Dismounted, already on the initial word here.

I’ve never climbed balconies as steep as these in Salzburg, very distant while stood before them on the ground, they are. And yet, the architecture, the façade allows many good adornments to use as a ladder up.
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Nov 4, 2008 10:22 AM CST Ode to one
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria164 Threads 4 Polls 19,249 Posts
PietroPaoloV: Dismounted, already on the initial word here.

I’ve never climbed balconies as steep as these in Salzburg, very distant while stood before them on the ground, they are. And yet, the architecture, the façade allows many good adornments to use as a ladder up.



You had me at 'dismounted'
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Nov 4, 2008 10:31 AM CST Ode to one
phoenix
phoenixphoenixparis, Ile-de-France France103 Threads 4 Polls 5,247 Posts
PietroPaoloV: What I like with Salzburg, a fine city in which I have never before been, is that they have easily accessible balconies, they are easy to climb up to, to do odes.
That, and the fathers of the daughters fall asleep early.



Then how do you know you would like it..When 'if ever' you go there you may find it a horrible place (not saying it is)..As for the bit where every goes to sleep apart from the mamas..who are easy to get to..I could buy into that..
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Nov 4, 2008 10:39 AM CST Ode to one
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria164 Threads 4 Polls 19,249 Posts
phoenix: Then how do you know you would like it..When 'if ever' you go there you may find it a horrible place (not saying it is)..As for the bit where every goes to sleep apart from the mamas..who are easy to get to..I could buy into that..



Get with the programme Phoenix, it is fun...

bouquet
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