CS writes a song ( Archived) (5)

(I’ll put this in both forums)

Probably nil thread, or total chaos.

Rules:

It’s supposed to be a funny one, OK? Make your best at keeping it funny. Allow your crazy, wild humor in your beautiful mind to stroll a bit.

You are allowed one line of lyrics at a time. ONE!
If you’ve added one line, only when someone else has contributed are you eligible to add another line of your own invention.
If two members happen to post simultaneously, the one member appearing first is the one line we keep.

We are building the lyrics, together

Melody :
We need one to base it on, so let’s make this an adaptation of Elton John’s Your Song.
Don’t ask me why that one of all songs. And if you haven’t heard it, Christ alone on a tandem bike, where have you been!?

Here is a link to it:


Theme :
We need a theme for the song. Let’s make it…. a new member walks into this world of CS, and what happens, where does he end up, happy ending? You decide!

Again, keep it funny.

Structure :

Do you see/hear how the original song goes?
The number is for how the line appears. The letter (a), (b) is how the rhymes are paired.

Here, the original lyrics to follow while listening to the clip above

1. – (a) It's a little bit funny this feeling inside
2. - (a) I'm not one of those who can easily hide
3. - (b) I don't have much money but boy if I did
4. - (b) I'd buy a big house where we both could live

5. - (a) If I was a sculptor, but then again, no
6. - (a) Or a man who makes potions in a traveling show
7. - (b) I know it's not much but it's the best I can do
8. - (b) My gift is my song and this one's for you

9. - (a) And you can tell everybody this is your song
10. - (b) It may be quite simple but now that it's done
11. – (CHORUS)
I hope you don't mind
I hope you don't mind that I put down in words
How wonderful life is while you're in the world

12. - (a) I sat on the roof and kicked off the moss
13. - (a) Well a few of the verses well they've got me quite cross
14. - (b) But the sun's been quite kind while I wrote this song
15. - (b) It's for people like you that keep it turned on

16. - (a) So excuse me forgetting but these things I do
17. - (a) You see I've forgotten if they're green or they're blue
18. - (b) Anyway the thing is what I really mean
19. - (b) Yours are the sweetest eyes I've ever seen

REPEAT
9. - (a) And you can tell everybody this is your song
10. - (b) It may be quite simple but now that it's done
11. – (CHORUS)
I hope you don't mind
I hope you don't mind that I put down in words
How wonderful life is while you're in the world

WHEN YOU POST YOUR LINE, YOU MUST ALWAYS START WITH THE NUMBER. Otherwise, we’ll lose track.
Example: 5. As he found out there’s a who’s been viewing me
GET IT!?

Template :
Now, the lines should be as follows, following the original above.
One member, one line at a time, remember!?
Whoever gets to the chorus first, gets to do it!

1. – (a)
2. - (a)
3. - (b)
4. - (b)

5. - (a)
6. - (a)
7. - (b)
8. - (b)

9. - (a)
10. - (b)
11. – (CHORUS)

12. - (a)
13. - (a)
14. - (b)
15. - (b)

16. - (a)
17. - (a)
18. - (b)
19. - (b)

REPEAT
9. - (a)
10. - (b)
11. – (CHORUS)

Start your engines, time to show that whit and prove your song writing talents.

Whenever someone feels like it, they can do a summary, what the song looks like so far.

To get us started, here are the first two lines in…

THE MAN WHO STUMBLED UPON CS

1. – (a) I walked down a highway, a lone cyber route
2. - (a) Where there was these gathered strangers, wond’rin what’s life about?

3. - (b) I looked at the picture, it made my eyes sparkle

4 - from there on i knew i was not loosing my marbles