The Pit ( Archived) (2)

Jan 22, 2009 6:11 PM CST The Pit
BarrenPneuma
BarrenPneumaBarrenPneumaGolden Staircase, Ontario Canada87 Threads 3 Polls 1,561 Posts
Splayed arm and leg over the blackness.
Sweat beads fall perpetually downwards.
Shards of rock bite into fingernails
Tension of muscles taut as springs
Shudders and spasms arc concave
Tenuous grip perilous foundation
Pebbles and grit spiral downwards.
The weight of doubt and fear
Vertebrae threaten to separate
Siren calls of the void beckon
Release from consuming effort
Struggle against infinity’s pull
Light obscured and falling downwards.
Will impedes the flow of time
Inexorably linked to others
Desire commands the path of others
What pull is on our own
Conflicting paths corrode progress
Freedom beckons falling downwards.
Expenses of need refute liberty
Black sins infect all contacts
Spirit bereft of innocence
Poison of the heart
Relinquish hold
And fall…
Downwards.
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Jan 22, 2009 6:18 PM CST The Pit
Ambrose2007
Ambrose2007Ambrose2007BFE, South Dakota USA67 Threads 10 Polls 8,881 Posts
BarrenPneuma: Splayed arm and leg over the blackness.
Sweat beads fall perpetually downwards.
Shards of rock bite into fingernails
Tension of muscles taut as springs
Shudders and spasms arc concave
Tenuous grip perilous foundation
Pebbles and grit spiral downwards.
The weight of doubt and fear
Vertebrae threaten to separate
Siren calls of the void beckon
Release from consuming effort
Struggle against infinity’s pull
Light obscured and falling downwards.
Will impedes the flow of time
Inexorably linked to others
Desire commands the path of others
What pull is on our own
Conflicting paths corrode progress
Freedom beckons falling downwards.
Expenses of need refute liberty
Black sins infect all contacts
Spirit bereft of innocence
Poison of the heart
Relinquish hold
And fall…
Downwards.

thumbs up head banger wine

One reason I avoid that huge pile of gravel my neighbor dumped just beyond my back lawn, Mark...dunno laugh
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