Temptations (6)

Sep 29, 2010 10:13 AM CST Temptations
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
I find temptations hard to battle
I find them hard to resist,
a feeling of vulnerability
as though my hands are tied behind my back.

the feeling washes over me
like the waves washing ashore.
The feelings of desire
not wanting to feel ignored

I see it day to day in my mind,
I see it through my own eyes
hoping it won't be seen or pry on.
Or am i only bidding on my own pride.

It makes me think of crazy ideas,
it makes me feel alive,
but to my mind it totally
burns inside
Sep 29, 2010 9:46 PM CST Temptations
KHD100
KHD100KHD100Edmonton, Alberta Canada129 Threads 3 Polls 2,495 Posts
scarwolve: I find temptations hard to battle
I find them hard to resist,
a feeling of vulnerability
as though my hands are tied behind my back.

the feeling washes over me
like the waves washing ashore.
The feelings of desire
not wanting to feel ignored

I see it day to day in my mind,
I see it through my own eyes
hoping it won't be seen or pry on.
Or am i only bidding on my own pride.

It makes me think of crazy ideas,
it makes me feel alive,
but to my mind it totally
burns inside


You are a great poet Wolve!!
(I'm not surprised ... Irish are famous for being poets)beer
Sep 30, 2010 1:10 PM CST Temptations
scarwolve
scarwolvescarwolvescarwolfs den, Carlow Ireland313 Threads 18 Polls 3,060 Posts
KHD100: You are a great poet Wolve!!
(I'm not surprised ... Irish are famous for being poets)
thank you very much!!! cheers hug
Sep 30, 2010 6:55 PM CST Temptations
opentuit
opentuitopentuitKnoxville, Tennessee USA14 Threads 2 Polls 2,014 Posts
scarwolve: thank you very much!!!



I'm mostly Irish.... I'll add my thanks as well!!applause


cheers
Sep 30, 2010 10:01 PM CST Temptations
ScorpiesS
ScorpiesSScorpiesSInuvik, Northwest Territories Canada13 Threads 1 Polls 71 Posts
Wolve, it's an awesome poem<3 Share more!
& Thanks for sharingcheers
Oct 2, 2010 10:18 AM CST Temptations
eyesthatknowwhy
eyesthatknowwhyeyesthatknowwhyWhitehorse, Yukon Territory Canada88 Threads 1,405 Posts
scarwolve: I find temptations hard to battle
I find them hard to resist,
a feeling of vulnerability
as though my hands are tied behind my back.

the feeling washes over me
like the waves washing ashore.
The feelings of desire
not wanting to feel ignored

I see it day to day in my mind,
I see it through my own eyes
hoping it won't be seen or pry on.
Or am i only bidding on my own pride.

It makes me think of crazy ideas,
it makes me feel alive,
but to my mind it totally
burns inside


very nice
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