some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ... (25)

Apr 18, 2013 8:27 AM CST some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ...
conduit
conduitconduitmelbourne, Victoria Australia2 Threads 236 Posts
How wonderful.... another poet thumbs up thumbs up
Apr 20, 2013 2:48 AM CST some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ...
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
AgentAjax: Here is one from me. Sparrow

As a lonely sparrow fly’s across the blue

I remember the times we had, me and you

In distance mountains blend with the sky

Below there are trees far and wide

Some stand proud some broken and leaning

I bet once too, their life had a meaning

Fly little sparrow as the song suggest

Little bird looking for a place to rest

Now exposed, confused the mind unrests

Does it take two to make a nest?

My memory is fading noting is moving

My life now feels like a horror movie

Once there was two once there was us

Now its just a sparrow on an aimless flight.




I like it AA ......


I have some stuff that I think would be too black for a sight such as this ... though there is one that maybe I can alter a bit and see if I can make it postable .... When I say black I mean depressive stuff not witch craft or anything ...
Apr 20, 2013 2:55 AM CST some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ...
AgentAjax
AgentAjaxAgentAjaxBrisbane, Queensland Australia81 Threads 1 Polls 3,965 Posts
PrOwLeR_: I like it AA ......I have some stuff that I think would be too black for a sight such as this ... though there is one that maybe I can alter a bit and see if I can make it postable .... When I say black I mean depressive stuff not witch craft or anything ...
Poetry comes in many forms I would like to see it either on here or via PM

I think you have a great gift and to be honest I enjoy your poetry more then from any well known poet. thumbs up
Apr 20, 2013 3:06 AM CST some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ...
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
True AA ..... I'll think on some of the others ...




... Need to know ...

I need to know, so could you please tell me
Why are things as they are, and not as they should be?
I’d be forever grateful if you, friend, could just settle my mind
Do you think, what I am missing, I might ever, be able to find?

It appears my purpose; you know my reason to get out of bed
Has been challenged with turmoil, seems, its just doing in my head
I am not happy here, nor am I happy over there
What ever happened to the days, when I just, didn’t care?

Seems as I get older, things, seem to, get out of sorts
Like if you handle a frog, you know, you really won’t catch warts
Or if you just sit for hours, and think your day away
Seems you are labeled as lazy, well, that’s what people say

Maybe I am just thinking, of where I’d really like to be
Though if you were to ask me this place, that would worry me
Because I don’t know anymore, of what it is, I seek
Maybe you can come and ask me, later into the week.
Apr 20, 2013 3:33 AM CST some stuff I wrote way back when I still believed ...
AgentAjax
AgentAjaxAgentAjaxBrisbane, Queensland Australia81 Threads 1 Polls 3,965 Posts
PrOwLeR_: True AA ..... I'll think on some of the others ...

... Need to know ...

I need to know, so could you please tell me
Why are things as they are, and not as they should be?
I’d be forever grateful if you, friend, could just settle my mind
Do you think, what I am missing, I might ever, be able to find?

It appears my purpose; you know my reason to get out of bed
Has been challenged with turmoil, seems, its just doing in my head
I am not happy here, nor am I happy over there
What ever happened to the days, when I just, didn’t care?

Seems as I get older, things, seem to, get out of sorts
Like if you handle a frog, you know, you really won’t catch warts
Or if you just sit for hours, and think your day away
Seems you are labeled as lazy, well, that’s what people say

Maybe I am just thinking, of where I’d really like to be
Though if you were to ask me this place, that would worry me
Because I don’t know anymore, of what it is, I seek
Maybe you can come and ask me, later into the week.


good stuff thumbs up
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