Serene ... this is the poem (27)

Aug 4, 2013 4:21 PM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Death Of A Man.......

I do not see through eyes any more, there are no exits at my door
Free to swing, in and out, I have died, I just found out, and to this, there’s more
As he told me, your life is over, can’t you see, he absurdly screamed at me
I can see, I can see, I shouted and I yelled, I am not dead, No! I cannot be.

Remove yourself I was ordered to do, now come and pay, your debt is due
For in your death my life will be, all of what you once, aspired to be
You got it wrong you wasted it, as he laughed and ranted, tormenting me
It’s now my turn now he sni**ered, from here you’ll watch, yes you’ll see

Of how you could have made it, because now your life is, Me!
A passenger of my hapless mind, as I am shown my glimpse of thee
My spirit took over my body, as my person lay lifeless in tatters
The true meaning of my life I just got, not now, that it really matters!

The drugs are finally working; at last my brain, yes it’s slowing down
My burning room, my loss of mind, my twisted painful hideous frown
At last I am all but free, as I am lowered down into the dug out ground
Could I really be dead? I asked myself, without even murmuring, a single sound

In dire disbelief and manic panic I just have now realized my final fate
God I wish I had put in order, all those things I believed would wait
My children do they really know, how I loved them, with all that was my very heart?
They are so tearful of my passing; their final goodbye, my too early a, time to part

In my mournful strains of fear, I stood there, quietly, just waiting, here, all alone
I keep hearing pitiful voices, crying, pleading, and begging, just wanting to go home
The devil appeared in front of my eyes, smiling profusely, he looked all over me
His evil grin and his piercing eyes, I feared, was he to be, my final destiny?

And for that moment I surrendered, I just caved in and feel tearfully to my knees
Forty seven years I had wasted, love only once tasted, I had blown it all, with such ease
Why do you wait here the devil asked me, have you still not learnt your truth, as yet?
No I replied, as I feared to speak, what is it I asked please tell me, I bellowed as he left

My eyes were heavy and weary as I franticly opened them up from my dream
This passing had been, just my nightmare; I am alive, yes alive I needed to scream
The meaning to my life had been answered in my devilish nightmare that night
So people take heed of what I tell you, or you may too find, you, on this torrid plight

If you love someone then just tell them, show them each day over, through and through
And when you don’t like someone, forgive them, it’s the loving thing to do
When all your days seem empty, no partner for your love to share
Remember the depths of my hell hole, and be thankful, of those all around you, whom care!



I posted this on facebook and realised not a lot has changed for me in seven years since I wrote this ...

I tell people that matter to me that they matter, just so they know, in case I never get to tell them ...

anyway I am off again ............................... peace
Aug 4, 2013 7:30 PM CST Serene ... this is the poem
P wave

It's said that as we near the end of our lives, it will be the things we didn't do, not the things we did, that we will regret thumbs up

So we need to live, love and laugh and cherish those that are in our hearts, live our dreams..

And not worry about the future, happiness is ours on a daily basis if we want to embrace it daisy

Oh and....














mumbling lol
Aug 5, 2013 2:06 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
CuspofMagic
CuspofMagicCuspofMagiclight, South Australia Australia278 Threads 7,904 Posts
Well Done...
Aug 14, 2013 6:44 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Merri .... Re your thread ......


please read my poem and note the last verse ...


I wrote this whilst reflecting as you are ....


I find if you tell people how you feel, and tell those that you love that if you did pass away quickly all including yourself would know what is in your heart .. and you would know what is in theirs ...


I hope this helps you with your reflection ....


cheers .....
Aug 14, 2013 6:51 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Oops... bump
Aug 23, 2013 6:48 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
AgentAjax
AgentAjaxAgentAjaxBrisbane, Queensland Australia81 Threads 1 Polls 3,965 Posts
PrOwLeR_: Death Of A Man.......

I do not see through eyes any more, there are no exits at my door
Free to swing, in and out, I have died, I just found out, and to this, there’s more
As he told me, your life is over, can’t you see, he absurdly screamed at me
I can see, I can see, I shouted and I yelled, I am not dead, No! I cannot be.

Remove yourself I was ordered to do, now come and pay, your debt is due
For in your death my life will be, all of what you once, aspired to be
You got it wrong you wasted it, as he laughed and ranted, tormenting me
It’s now my turn now he sni**ered, from here you’ll watch, yes you’ll see

Of how you could have made it, because now your life is, Me!
A passenger of my hapless mind, as I am shown my glimpse of thee
My spirit took over my body, as my person lay lifeless in tatters
The true meaning of my life I just got, not now, that it really matters!

The drugs are finally working; at last my brain, yes it’s slowing down
My burning room, my loss of mind, my twisted painful hideous frown
At last I am all but free, as I am lowered down into the dug out ground
Could I really be dead? I asked myself, without even murmuring, a single sound

In dire disbelief and manic panic I just have now realized my final fate
God I wish I had put in order, all those things I believed would wait
My children do they really know, how I loved them, with all that was my very heart?
They are so tearful of my passing; their final goodbye, my too early a, time to part

In my mournful strains of fear, I stood there, quietly, just waiting, here, all alone
I keep hearing pitiful voices, crying, pleading, and begging, just wanting to go home
The devil appeared in front of my eyes, smiling profusely, he looked all over me
His evil grin and his piercing eyes, I feared, was he to be, my final destiny?

And for that moment I surrendered, I just caved in and feel tearfully to my knees
Forty seven years I had wasted, love only once tasted, I had blown it all, with such ease
Why do you wait here the devil asked me, have you still not learnt your truth, as yet?
No I replied, as I feared to speak, what is it I asked please tell me, I bellowed as he left

My eyes were heavy and weary as I franticly opened them up from my dream
This passing had been, just my nightmare; I am alive, yes alive I needed to scream
The meaning to my life had been answered in my devilish nightmare that night
So people take heed of what I tell you, or you may too find, you, on this torrid plight

If you love someone then just tell them, show them each day over, through and through
And when you don’t like someone, forgive them, it’s the loving thing to do
When all your days seem empty, no partner for your love to share
Remember the depths of my hell hole, and be thankful, of those all around you, whom care!
I posted this on facebook and realised not a lot has changed for me in seven years since I wrote this ...

I tell people that matter to me that they matter, just so they know, in case I never get to tell them ...

anyway I am off again ...............................


I must admit your poetry is always well delivered. cheers
Aug 23, 2013 7:59 PM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
PrOwLeR_: Merri .... Re your thread ......please read my poem and note the last verse ... I wrote this whilst reflecting as you are ....I find if you tell people how you feel, and tell those that you love that if you did pass away quickly all including yourself would know what is in your heart .. and you would know what is in theirs ...I hope this helps you with your reflection ....cheers .....



Yes.. thank you... I know that you should say what you feel... but I cant and I don't..

Because too many people leave suddenly, and its easier to say naught. rose rose rose

If you just sit on a middle track and don't let emotions interfere, then you can better get on with the stuff in life you have to do... like work, etc..
Aug 24, 2013 3:28 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather: Yes.. thank you... I know that you should say what you feel... but I cant and I don't..

Because too many people leave suddenly, and its easier to say naught.

If you just sit on a middle track and don't let emotions interfere, then you can better get on with the stuff in life you have to do... like work, etc..



Everyone's different wine
Aug 24, 2013 4:20 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
serene56: Everyone's different



I know... I am odd... but safe... wine
Sep 4, 2013 6:46 PM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Merriweather: I know... I am odd... but safe...




Why not be both .... cool .....



Rarely in life do we ever get a second chance ...
Maybe its easier to hide away and simply dance
Perhaps you may not see what is there for you
though in your heart, to yourself, are you being true ??


Safe is an option, though loving can be grand
When its found, a fella, may just ask for your hand
So sitting on a fence in the middle of some road
I ask you sweet lady, does it really lessen the load?

Life is just a chance, something given to us all
so why not use this chance, so what if we take a fall
We have but one lifetime, with so much we need to do
How hard could it be Merri, to tell another I Love YoU ...

You may take my poem and heed it, or dismiss till the end
Though trust me when I tell you, you still feel my friend
Now I just sat here and wrote this, I hope you like it dear
Ans please let me remind you, you have nothing at all to fear .. lips
Sep 5, 2013 3:55 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Lookin4missright
Lookin4missrightLookin4missrightmelbourne, Victoria Australia400 Threads 24,032 Posts
Think i'm getting into this poem thing thumbs up




If your partner gives you trouble spam

Turn around and give her double detective detective

Grab your partner by the foot dancing

Turn it around and shove it up her moot confused dunno






confused moot, mout, mut, muut frustrated i hate being weird doh



sad flower
Sep 5, 2013 3:58 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Lookin4missright: Think i'm getting into this poem thing

---------------------------------------------------------If your partner gives you trouble

Turn around and give her double

Grab your partner by the foot

Turn it around and shove it up her moot



moot, mout, mut, muut i hate being weird



laugh laugh


A guy I went out with years ago used to say that, very quietly and almost politely LOL! when I had been ranting and raving at him about his bad behaviour laugh

Godluvim, I've never heard anyone else say that giggle
Sep 5, 2013 4:27 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
PrOwLeR_: Why not be both .... .....
Rarely in life do we ever get a second chance ...
Maybe its easier to hide away and simply dance
Perhaps you may not see what is there for you
though in your heart, to yourself, are you being true ??Safe is an option, though loving can be grand
When its found, a fella, may just ask for your hand
So sitting on a fence in the middle of some road
I ask you sweet lady, does it really lessen the load?

Life is just a chance, something given to us all
so why not use this chance, so what if we take a fall
We have but one lifetime, with so much we need to do
How hard could it be Merri, to tell another I Love YoU ...

You may take my poem and heed it, or dismiss till the end
Though trust me when I tell you, you still feel my friend
Now I just sat here and wrote this, I hope you like it dear
Ans please let me remind you, you have nothing at all to fear ..


Yes... I like it dear... rollers
and If I felt frightenedhole
I would run off in fourth gearmotorcycle motorcycle

So lets see what happens
when I walk thru your doortip hat
Maybe a lot of good timescartwheel joy
and a big walk... that's for sure..
daydream

Sep 5, 2013 5:13 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Lookin4missright
Lookin4missrightLookin4missrightmelbourne, Victoria Australia400 Threads 24,032 Posts
serene56: A guy I went out with years ago used to say that, very quietly and almost politely LOL! when I had been ranting and raving at him about his bad behaviour

Godluvim, I've never heard anyone else say that




Does that mean i'm Spesh rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing





ps, i worked in a pub years ago and was full of army dudes rolling on the floor laughing

think they used to sing that while running or killing lmfao rolling on the floor laughing
Sep 5, 2013 6:33 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Merriweather:

Yes... I like it dear...
and If I felt frightened
I would run off in fourth gear

So lets see what happens
when I walk thru your door
Maybe a lot of good times
and a big walk... that's for sure..




You may run and run and run MeRRi though No matter where you go, where ever you are .... there you are!! ... laugh
Sep 5, 2013 6:36 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
PrOwLeR_: You may run and run and run MeRRi though No matter where you go, where ever you are .... there you are!! ...



Well, I suppose up there at yours... I'd always have company... my shadow in your sunlight??

wave
Sep 5, 2013 6:38 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Merriweather: Well, I suppose up there at yours... I'd always have company... my shadow in your sunlight??





Talking to yourself is OK in QLD ... I don't have a shadow ... I lost it in a game of cards .... cool
Sep 5, 2013 6:41 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
PrOwLeR_: Talking to yourself is OK in QLD ... I don't have a shadow ... I lost it in a game of cards ....



Dang... you lost that as well as the shirt off your back...

Winners and Grinners hey??laugh
Sep 5, 2013 6:45 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
PrOwLeR_
PrOwLeR_PrOwLeR_Mermaid BeacH, Queensland Australia98 Threads 1,290 Posts
Merriweather: Dang... you lost that as well as the shirt off your back...

Winners and Grinners hey??




yeah tis like GrOwLeRs and PrOwLeRs ...... in a round about kind of way ... drinking
Sep 5, 2013 6:48 AM CST Serene ... this is the poem
Merriweather
MerriweatherMerriweatherAdelaide, South Australia Australia51 Threads 11,403 Posts
PrOwLeR_: yeah tis like GrOwLeRs and PrOwLeRs ...... in a round about kind of way ...



Nothing new there... You prowl the streets ... and your body growls atcha...

I know.. coz I hear it.. laugh
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