by gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts, USA
Sep 2010 686 Views 11 comments
Empty
smile, no shade to share
good talker, good listener
found porch, vacated
good talker, good listener
found porch, vacated
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Posted: Sep 2010
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Comments (11)
Very creative. I enjoyed this one a lot. Cute and Clever!
CJ
I value your comments and am pleased that you find some complexity and/or enjoyment in the haiku. I was hoping that the poem's meaning would transcend its impetus. "Hmmmmm"
freeatlast64847, Thank you for reminding me to look around back!
Thank you, good poet. It's looking at life through the smile that does it. Cheers.
To ditch is not my style. To catch-and-release??? I do love the power of words to tell the truth while revealing to the reader their own story. Thanks for the Jazzy compliment!