Her mind was as amazing as the big bang What a sweet thing I could see her ideas form on her facial expressions exploding in her mind like a million fire flies raining down her throat balancing on her tongue waiting to be spoke Her words were rivers I bathed in under the stars naked dreaming worlds of green eyed tulips and infinite possibilities I sat crooked smile forever wanting to be pulled deeper and deeper into her mind where ideas were conceived and born and infant words cried for the milk of a welcoming ear
An amazing string of images and progress from mind to words. I really wonder if it's your green eyes that have seen and made your mind express the process in such an amazing way. May you ever remain so green.
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 9, 2010
Thank you for reading !! I wonder, Maybe my green eyes do see things in a special way... interesting thought =)
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 9, 2010
I guess I see and feel words on a notable level. My mind is like one continuous poem waiting for me to pen down portions of it, so that I can share it here with you. So i write the stories of my life, the things i see others go through, the magical moments we encounter. I write it all as i felt it...and as my poetic green eyes took it in.
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USASep 9, 2010
Amazing mind to dream jot this down for our reading pleasure!
nclsySingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 9, 2010
Nice poem with good imagery. I liked how instead of the ears crying for the milk of words, it was the other way round. :D
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 9, 2010
And so is your mind, I enjoyed reading this so much
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 11, 2010
Thank you all so very much
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 17, 2010
Thank you =) I'm very pleased that you liked it !! made my day =)
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I wonder,
Maybe my green eyes do see things in a special way...
interesting thought =)
My mind is like one continuous poem waiting for me to pen down portions of it, so that I can share it here with you.
So i write the stories of my life, the things i see others go through, the magical moments we encounter. I write it all as i felt it...and as my poetic green eyes took it in.
I'm very pleased that you liked it !!
made my day =)
rob