Her Mind Amazing

Her mind was as amazing as
the big bang
What a sweet thing
I could see her ideas form
on her facial expressions
exploding in her mind like
a million fire flies
raining down her throat
balancing on her tongue
waiting to be spoke
Her words were
rivers I bathed in
under the stars
naked
dreaming
worlds of green eyed tulips
and infinite possibilities
I sat
crooked smile
forever wanting to be pulled
deeper
and deeper
into her mind
where ideas were conceived and born
and infant words
cried for the milk
of a welcoming ear
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2010

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Scholar_Gypsy
An amazing string of images and progress from mind to words. I really wonder if it's your green eyes that have seen and made your mind express the process in such an amazing way. May you ever remain so green.
Blizza801
Thank you for reading !!
I wonder,
Maybe my green eyes do see things in a special way...
interesting thought =)
Blizza801
I guess I see and feel words on a notable level.
My mind is like one continuous poem waiting for me to pen down portions of it, so that I can share it here with you.
So i write the stories of my life, the things i see others go through, the magical moments we encounter. I write it all as i felt it...and as my poetic green eyes took it in.
amahlala
Amazing mind to dream jot this down for our reading pleasure!bouquet
nclsy
Nice poem with good imagery. I liked how instead of the ears crying for the milk of words, it was the other way round. :D
Redex
And so is your mind, I enjoyed reading this so muchhandshake
Blizza801
Thank you all so very much
Blizza801
Thank you =)
I'm very pleased that you liked it !!
made my day =)
Gashly
from one crooked smile to another... cheers
trurorob
yep, very cool Blizza!
rob
Blizza801
I'm really glad that you all enjoyed it...thank you for the comments !!
QuietStormF
One day,,, even if not in this lifetime.. I hope to be able to write as beuatifully and as eloquently as you do... teddybear
jeddah12
a powerful and good words man,handshake cheers
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