Through the half closed teak wood door Hypersensitive, shy moon's light surpassed, Oh beauty, Holding the dream whilst thy bath What is in thy mind?
Filled with unending desire Drenched in the lake of shyness Attracting desire to thy tenebrous womb In the last hour of night You espied a relentless ride; Arum flower witnessed the holy act....
Committing the act thy decided to hide My Friend, hiding finger's touched thy space The economics of need can't be undarkened A clover was offered at thy feet Awaiting thy response, days surpassed
The courier of dream hath come Putting an end to the endless wait Shocked at the earthly present, A tide hit the chambers of pride 'Goose-foot' was thy answer
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 10, 2010
Wonderful write, almost like one of the English romantics but probably better. I wonder how many incarnations it will take before I can understand your meanings....tenebrous? CJ
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 11, 2010
Amazing,beautiful write from,"God's own country"Kudos to you dear.Wonderful thoughts indeed,just love this.Thank you for sharing.
i had the same thought as CJ...shelley and keats come to mind...with utmost respect, hariksna. it may be too deep for me to ponder this morning, before coffee. it's lovely in it's flow. thank you for sharing...
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