Deeply and silent in pain she breathes To her very life she daily cleaves In dew and rain she quietly cries Her tears fall from cloud frown skies Her roaring foam flecked seas now weep We did not her in safety keep Each tiny fragile green grass blade With tender care was custom made sun smile power she will unstinting give So every being can feel and live Through tendrils of her mountain mist By the light her face will soon be kissed Gaze deep into her eyes so blue Promise to take good care of you In the skies of a magic star still dawn So your every strength shall be re born
While I may not agree that there's an actual consciousness, your creative personification of Mother Earth is inspiring. Thank you for sharing this poem.
you oughta be sorry...what does it all mean? let's keep dancing..til first glance of eden....
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 12, 2010
Its an awakening to us humans to sit up and take note of it and take care of her and she in turn will care for us.Inspiring write,Carol dear,I like it.
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKSep 12, 2010
Wonderfully inspiring CJ Yes, we should take more care of her, individually and collectively. Great write CJ..thanks for showing us the way.
Hi, caroljoyce, We did not her in safety keep and so, with hers and yours, tears I too do weep. Thank you for painting Earth as it could be with a little more help from her friends.
C.J. I love the gentle sentiment you so eloquently express here... "So every being can feel and live" "Promise to take good care of you"...what we need and want. very well done lady.
ironmanhamilton, Ontario CanadaSep 12, 2010
Deep thoughts promising thoughts Thank you for the inspirations
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Fed up with the laws of Land
She shall incarnate
to teach the law of breathlessness...
Yes, we should take more care of her, individually and collectively.
Great write CJ..thanks for showing us the way.
Ljj
We did not her in safety keep and so, with hers and yours, tears I too do weep. Thank you for painting Earth as it could be with a little more help from her friends.
"So every being can feel and live"
"Promise to take good care of you"...what we need and want. very well done lady.
promising thoughts
Thank you for the inspirations