Sun rose in the west an set in the east indifference of thought or implanted beast. Current past mind set for those to behold, into the circle not brave yet is bold. A mindset of yore into each day, compounded strife the real slips away. A biggie it's not yet the magnifed vision, manifests a growth with fertilized thought. Clarity is gone as a sprout rises forth, to echo the past in host no remorse. A bitter apple hangs by the branch of a tree, it rot's life around it till it's time, break free~
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Sharing a thought of some people I've met over the years and how their past controls their present and future, when the issues of the past are never dealt with and put away. I've met some beautiful people this way, if only they'd let go of their issues by dealing with it:)
Ty Andrew, some say I'm too deep, overall though, I feel what I've to say can make some difference in some lives. Thats truly important in my life. Ty again my friend:)
bentlee...too deep? is there such a thing? is the Grand Canyon too deep?...Is the base soloist's voice too deep?...is Bentlee's poems too deep? ...no, it's a fair trade.
Lol, a good guy, can one replace a critical existance with a placebo? Perhaps yes, but is it gonna work:)
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 16, 2010
Enjoyed reading this so true thoughts, yes at times I find your poems difficult to understand, but we all live on different levels and the ones I get I like thankyou
luvuluvme2Smith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 17, 2010
Often people will change after taking some time to look at themselves and the results of their actions. time and trust is a important part in this process.
Ty for adding your thought here Luvu. Thats true in alot of cases, some can never get past the nature of the consequence to stop the cycle. Where others do.
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