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Ain't love a story?

Just suppose and juxtapose
you 'n me together, who knows
two peas in a pod, a wink, a nod
a couplet of rhyme, just said in time

How we could be, some vision to foresee
Frick and Frack, and not look back
a bucket of list, togethers we missed
our way of wiles, lovings and smiles

What wasn't 'til now, greater some how
to feel and to know, love makes it so
there's dancing in rain, joy and pain
we've time together, for worse or better

We'll know then that we've just begun
you'll know too that all has purpose
when we find we are the wanted one
jump lover's leap, don't be nervous

So what you say, let's breathless run away
make music of life, rid worry, pitch strife
the music comes up, climb in the stirrup
and ride to the sunset, so glad we met

© agoodguy2have 2010-09-16
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
maybe wider than deep

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Comments (18)

freeatlast64847
Nice one goodguy! beer
Ladyjj
Tis deep and wide GG.. a good write thumbs up
Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
Ljj
Scholar_Gypsy
No voice have I seen nicer
Than that of Love,
What has remained
And will remain forever
Under this so high blue vault.


Thanks for sharing this nice work.
Gashly
that leap...as deep as it is wide. never fear. nice one, GG! cheers
caroljoyce
Lovely piece, tentative and tender. I really don't know how you manage to make it sound like it is all rhyming, when only parts of it do, quite an art form you have developed. May there be no more 'togethers missed,'
CJ
Swan87
Oh God how Beautiful !!! I liked it .. It's like Lessons of Life & Love !!
"So what you say, let's breathless run away
make music of life, rid worry, pitch strife
the music comes up, climb in the stirrup
and ride to the sunset, so glad we met "

BRAVO !!
hug

Swan
seene
goodguy
WOW~!!!!head banger wow
serpico12
really very good writing.nice use of words..
trurorobonline today!
clever write Dave!
rob
Althea7
Delightful
gotitall
a goodguy, very clever poem, intelligent mind methinks sire,
johntheraven1
wow my friend nice job ...john
Happygolucky4u
What a nice vision. bouquet
hariksna
GG ... what a message...indepth...sinking with readers yearning and love....Thanks
rebeccakelly78
thank you for your comments on my poetry. my you have many poems, this is the first i have read and I am looking forward to reading the others
beautifulyou
GG, I really like the vitality and tempo of this write!

It's great!

Thanks for the infusion of energy!


dancing


@;--
Ladybee42
very clever write GGuy
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Once found, may it be a never-ending story with wiles, lovings and smiles. There's hope and music in these uplifting, poetically-rhyming lines.
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