No Blame

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Sep 2010 1,146 Views 20 comments

No Blame

I wandered through many open gates
trod a delicate worn path

I Stood alone
I looked out to sea

sadly

there's nothing there for me

Some heartfelt cries from deep within
would bring me to a sigh
My soul was weary

Deep love is just a lie

It brings forth the wrentching ache
No love here to save
Just tears sliding through my heart

To lay upon a watery grave

What level can be put
what measure of the mind

I'm lost again

Its me I cannot find

Your view of me has gone
I look and that is true...

Woe! of Love
is only for the few

It rests within our souls
For wandering times may crawl
Your name upon my breath

I am mute to even call

When sensed

Its how we spend our time.....

I came across you,
and wavered in lieu

Of seconds of the days go by

So, I was in wait of you
It was all a painful lie

There is no blame to cast out
no ragged souls to reel in
Just empty space of time

There is no place for sin

As dawn to moonlight
an opposite love
which took its lonely toll

Here now I stand
against the wind

Just a silent naked soul

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Posted: Sep 2010

About this poem:

another journey in life
xx
SS

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Comments (20)

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USASep 24, 2010

a journey for some of us, at a loss. empty spaces, sophia...some better left unfilled, hindsight.

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USASep 24, 2010

Sad, but brilliant as always. Cheers!

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKSep 25, 2010

Hi Sophie,
An evoking write wonderfully done..thanks for sharing,
Don't know why, but a film "Sophie's choice" comes to mind.

Ljj

RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 25, 2010

Trod delicate worn path, says it all in this beatiful written piece.

serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 25, 2010

such a beautiful written poem sophia..life with its many dips and tunnels..standing against the wind..i can identify with that..brilliant work...

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainSep 25, 2010

What a fantastic poem, its all there, great emotions, reminds me of your black boxers!!
rob

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandSep 25, 2010

gashly..Oh yes!, hindsight! you are one wise poet little lady!,thank you for reading my piece, always touches me your comments.

SS

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FAL! So glad you liked! Yes sadness, touches all at times on their journey, Its my love of poetry, writing and reading other pieces on this forum, and yours that always lifts me.

SS
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Dave The Master!
As horizons lay low tis another day tomorrow for the sun to rise..Thank you, you help my spirits rise.

SS
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Hello JJ! Oh gosh! that movie,was a masterpiece! What a dreadful. choice she had to make. You put things so much in perspective, your a wonderful person.

SS

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Hello Redex!
I see that you see, I feel that you feel! Thank you so much for your insight! We redheads are a wonderful strange lot.

SS
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Sweet Serpico!
I admire your work, and admire your comments always! Yes against the wind, and I know, you Know, that it can also be invigorating.

SS
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Hello Rob
Your comments always make me smile! I glad you liked my write.. Black boxers?
What are you doing in my drawers!

I love to read your poems, they come from all corners of your mind. Excellent!

SS
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EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusSep 26, 2010

"I Stood alone
I looked out to sea

sadly

there's nothing there for me"

How poetically and utterly forlorn, we mourn with you...

hariksnaKerala:Cochin, Kerala IndiaSep 26, 2010

The poem reflects a true seekers spirit...beautifully written..thanks sophia

Swan87Syria, QatarSep 26, 2010

Wonderfuly written
Great Job

Swan

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 10, 2010

Sophiasummer

Love Every single Letter and all the spaces between.

Brilliant,
Pilgrim

gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandNov 10, 2010

a brilliant write, by any standard, this poem, will stand alone, just like the lonliness it represents, brilliant sophia.

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 10, 2010

Hello Harikasna!
I humbly thank you my friend, for taking the time to read my windswept poem

Sophia
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Hello Swan!
Oh! how lovely Swan for you to comment on my poem!Thanyou!

Love Sophia
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Beautifulyou!

You are so kind, your comments strengthen my view.
I hold your comments close to me.
I thank you Beautiful...
"In truth, the revealing can be such a lonely path"

Love Sophia
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Hello pilgrim!
I smile dear friend, once again I am humbled..
I saw I felt I wrote....

Thank you again!

Sophia
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Hello Ben!

I am honored for your comments you wrote! coming from such a brilliant poet as your self....

I treasure them

Twas a lonely place to be, and write...

Sophia
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sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 10, 2010

Hello Earlgrey!

Thank you sweetman
Tis truly was a mourning,
I raise my head and soul to the sun and stars now, I thank you deeply for your caring..

Sophia
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kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 11, 2010

Sure does seem like a lie if we our selves can't experience the deep love that so few in the world share. it can't be possible to be only limited with just a few to experience can it? beautiful write sophia.

dinesh123Colombo, Western Sri LankaNov 11, 2010

Dear Sophia,
At the end it's painful............yes nice work........
come come with another...

Din

RedexNorthumberland, England UKApr 28, 2017

wow just another bring back poem, that too stands the test of time EVEN now my haur is whitish

Love second reading and nothing is dimished

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandApr 28, 2017

Redex
To resurrect one of my writes!

Thankyou, I read it as it had be a long time.

How wonderful to place it for me again.

Ones' writes' tend to slip away.

Thankyou

xxSophia.